Phân tích "In the past, lectures were used as a way of teaching large numbers of student, but now with the development of technology for education, many people think there is no justification for attending lectures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "In the past, lectures were used as a way of teaching large numbers of student, but now with the development of technology for education, many people think there is no justification for attending lectures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

In the past, lectures were used as a way of teaching large numbers of student, but now with the development of technology for education, many people think there is no justification for attending lectures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: In learning and practice of more complex ideas, the computer is not adequate.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • It can tell if the answer is right or wrong but it cannot tell where the student went wrong.
        • Teachers can provide a faster and simpler way to present information to the students.
      • Example: A student learns about gravity using a computer program that checks answers but can't provide explanations, whereas a teacher offers a more effective method by explaining gravity as a force pulling objects toward Earth's center and demonstrating acceleration due to gravity with a falling ball video.

  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Teachers add their own knowledge gained through experience to that of books and other resources. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "knowledge" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: They teach not only  academic subjects, but also many social skills.
      • Example: A history teacher imparts knowledge on the American Civil War using both research and personal insights, while also teaching valuable social and critical thinking skills to her students.

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• Theo hướng Partly agree (Vừa ủng hộ ý này, vừa ủng hộ ý kia) có thể tham khảo cách triển khai: 
  • Intro câu 2: Trong khi ý này cũng đúng, ý kia cũng có lý (While I partly agree that lectures may not be the sole or even primary method of education in today's context, they still hold considerable value in certain scenarios)
    • Body 1: On the other hand, viết về ý “vì sao có nhiều người nghĩ là there is no justification for attending lectures”
      • Main idea: Online platforms, virtual classrooms, interactive simulations, and other digital tools offer unprecedented opportunities for learning, often at one's own pace and convenience. 
        • Supporting idea: 
          • These resources provide diverse avenues for students to engage with content, catering to various learning styles and preferences.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
          • In this context, the necessity of physically attending lectures might seem diminished.
    • Body 2: On the one hand, viết về ý”attending lectures vẫn còn quan trọng”
      • Main idea 1: lectures serve purposes beyond mere content delivery. 
        • Supporting idea: They provide a structured environment for students to interact with peers and instructors, fostering discussions, debates, and collaborative learning experiences. 
        • Example: In my history class, lectures serve as a catalyst for engaging discussions and lively debates, fostering critical thinking and collaborative learning among students through thought-provoking questions and facilitated discourse.
      • Main idea 2: Moreover, lectures offer a platform for real-time clarification of doubts and questions, enabling immediate feedback and deeper understanding. 
        • Supporting idea: The human element in education, represented by the presence of a knowledgeable instructor, can significantly enhance the learning process, especially in complex subjects that require expert guidance.

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