Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "In the modern era, technology has become an essential part of everyday life. However, while it is often argued that technology such as the Internet and cellphone has beneficial effects on our relationship, it also has a number of drawbacks in human interaction. This essay will analyze the positive aspects and drawbacks of this issue." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.
I. Đề bài
In the modern era, technology has become an essential part of everyday life. However, while it is often argued that technology such as the Internet and cellphone has beneficial effects on our relationship, it also has a number of drawbacks in human interaction. This essay will analyze the positive aspects and drawbacks of this issue.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
Dạng advantages & disadvantages thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
- Dạng advantages & disadvantages có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages
- Main idea: Technology has revolutionized the way we communicate and interact with one another.
- Supporting idea: The internet has made it possible to connect with people from all over the world, breaking down geographical barriers and enabling us to form new relationships and friendships with people we may never have met otherwise.
- Example:
- Social media platforms have made it easier to stay in touch with friends and family, even if they live far away. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý cách dùng even if / even though / even so / even when
- Video conferencing and messaging apps allow us to have face-to-face conversations with people in real-time, even if we are in different parts of the world.
- Main idea: Technology has revolutionized the way we communicate and interact with one another.
- Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages
- Main idea 1: It is not uncommon to see people sitting in a room together, all staring at their phones instead of engaging in conversation with one another. >> IELTS TUTOR Giải thích phrasal verb: engage in sth
- Supporting idea: In some cases, technology can even be a barrier to forming meaningful relationships, as people may rely on social media or dating apps to connect with others instead of meeting people in person.
- Example:
- Main idea 2: Technology has given rise to online bullying and harassment, which can have a detrimental effect on people's mental health and relationships.
- Supporting idea:
- Example:
- Main idea 1: It is not uncommon to see people sitting in a room together, all staring at their phones instead of engaging in conversation with one another. >> IELTS TUTOR Giải thích phrasal verb: engage in sth
- Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages
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