Giải đề"In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING (Kèm bài sửa HS IELTS TUTOR)

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In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Nhớ đọc kĩ cách viết dạng OUTWEIGH sao cho không sai task response nhé

• Dạng outweigh thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (disadvantages>advantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: regional areas may lack the necessary infrastructure and resources, making it challenging for businesses to operate efficiently.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Regional areas often have less developed transportation networks compared to urban centers. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
        • This includes highways, railways, and airports, making the movement of goods and people slower and more expensive.
      • Example: The manufacturing company's relocation to a rural area is hindered by the inadequate transportation infrastructure, marked by limited access to highways and a distant airport, resulting in increased costs and delays in raw material transport and product delivery.
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: Some regional areas may struggle to attract and retain skilled labor, leading to a potential shortage of qualified workers.
      • Supporting idea: Skilled workers may prefer to reside in urban areas where there are more diverse job opportunities, cultural amenities, and a perceived higher quality of life, making it challenging for regional areas to retain talent.
      • Example: A 2022 report by the National Farmers' Federation found that 60% of farmers are facing difficulties in recruiting and retaining skilled workers.
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: It can contribute to the economic development of regional areas, creating job opportunities and boosting local economies.
        • Supporting idea: 
          • The establishment of industries and businesses in regional areas generates employment opportunities, reducing unemployment rates and providing residents with stable sources of income.
          • The influx of businesses leads to increased local spending by employees on housing, goods, and services, stimulating economic activity in the region.
      • Main idea 2: Moving industries away from big cities can help alleviate traffic congestion and reduce pollution, leading to a better quality of life for urban residents.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 1 (Complaint letter) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Relocating industries to regional areas decreases the concentration of industrial traffic in urban centers, alleviating congestion on roads and highways.
          • Industries often contribute to air pollution in urban areas. Moving them away can lead to a reduction in emissions, improving air quality and public health.
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: Regional areas may lack the necessary infrastructure and resources, making it challenging for businesses to operate efficiently.
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Regional areas often have less developed transportation networks compared to urban centers. 
          • This includes highways, railways, and airports, making the movement of goods and people slower and more expensive.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi)
        • Example: The manufacturing company's relocation to a rural area is hindered by the inadequate transportation infrastructure, marked by limited access to highways and a distant airport, resulting in increased costs and delays in raw material transport and product delivery.
      • Main idea 2: Some regional areas may struggle to attract and retain skilled labor, leading to a potential shortage of qualified workers.
        • Supporting idea: Skilled workers may prefer to reside in urban areas where there are more diverse job opportunities, cultural amenities, and a perceived higher quality of life, making it challenging for regional areas to retain talent.
        • Example: A 2022 report by the National Farmers' Federation found that 60% of farmers are facing difficulties in recruiting and retaining skilled workers.

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