Phân tích "In recent years, traffic jams has become a headache problem around the world. In order to solve this problem, some people think governments have to build wider road to satisfy and solve the traffic jams. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Bên cạnh Phân tích +kèm sửa bài"The table below shows the number of visitors in the UK and their average spending from 2003 to 2008" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "In recent years, traffic jams has become a headache problem around the world. In order to solve this problem, some people think governments have to build wider road to satisfy and solve the traffic jams. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

I. Đề bài

In recent years, traffic jams has become a headache problem around the world. In order to solve this problem, some people think governments have to build wider road to satisfy and solve the traffic jams. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

II. Kiến thức liên quan

IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:

III. Phân tích

  • Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
  • Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
      • Main idea: Wider roads can accommodate more vehicles, potentially easing congestion during peak hours. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "congestion" tiếng anh 
        • Supporting idea: With more lanes or wider lanes, traffic flow may improve, allowing vehicles to move more freely and reducing congestion.
        • Example: For example, in 2012, Caltrans widened a 10-mile stretch of the I-405 freeway in the Sepulveda Pass.** The project added two new lanes in each direction, bringing the total number of lanes to six in each direction.** The result was a significant reduction in congestion, with travel times on the freeway decreasing by up to 20%.
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
      • Main idea: Widening roads can provide additional space for turning lanes, merging lanes, or dedicated lanes for specific types of vehicles. 
        • Supporting idea: These improvements can enhance traffic efficiency and reduce bottlenecks, leading to smoother traffic flow. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ"improvement"tiếng anh 
        • Example: The M25 orbital motorway in London was widened in the late 1990s, and the project included the addition of a dedicated lane for high-occupancy vehicles (HOV). The HOV lane has helped to reduce traffic congestion, and it has also encouraged people to carpool or take public transit.
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