Giải đề"In many cities, planners have separated schools, homes, shops, offices in specific areas which were widely separated from each other. Do you think advantages of this policy outweigh disadvantages to the city residents?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Kèm bài sửa HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 7.5)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích & Sửa đề"In many cities, planners have separated schools, homes, shops, offices in specific areas which were widely separated from each other"IELTS WRITING TASK 1

In many cities, planners have separated schools, homes, shops, offices in specific areas which were widely separated from each other. Do you think advantages of this policy outweigh disadvantages to the city residents?

HOẶC:

In many cities, planners tend to arrange shops, schools, offices, and homes in specific areas and separate them from each other. Do you think the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng outweigh nếu target dưới 7.0 thì có thể viết theo hướng TOTALLY bố cục bài như sau (nếu theo hướng ADVANTAGES > DISADVANTAGES)
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao ADVANTAGES > DISADVANTAGES
    • Main idea: A city arranged on the basis of clearly-defined functional areas can make people’s life much easier and more efficient   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic "Study" IELTS
    • Supporting idea: 
      • Functional zoning allows for the efficient allocation of resources by concentrating similar activities in specific areas. 
      • This can lead to optimized infrastructure development, reducing the wastage of resources.
    • Example: if all government offices are located in the same area,they will save tremendous amount of time when they need to get their bureaucratic paperwork completed (HOẶC: When we want to buy a specific model of computer, for example, we can simply visit the city’s hi-tech market)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "locate" tiếng anh
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao ADVANTAGES > DISADVANTAGES
    • Main idea: it is convenient for government to manage the areas when the areas are built for some specific purpose separately.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "convenience" tiếng anh
    • Supporting idea: 
      • When areas are built for specific purposes, such as residential, commercial, or industrial zones, it allows for more efficient allocation of resources. 
      • The government can tailor its services and infrastructure development based on the unique needs of each area.
    • Example: The educational authorities can be established in the area where the schools are located. 

• Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
  • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
    • Main idea 1: Strict separation can result in a lack of diversity within neighborhoods. 
      • Supporting idea: Mixing residential, commercial, and recreational spaces can create vibrant and diverse communities, fostering social interactions and a sense of community.
      • Example: Transit-Oriented Developments (TODs), which integrate residences, shops, offices, and green spaces near public transportation, enhance diversity by attracting residents from various backgrounds, promote social interaction through walking and cycling, and create vibrant community hubs with parks, plazas, and cafes.
    • Main idea 2: Overly rigid zoning may limit the adaptability of cities to changing needs. 
      • Supporting idea: As economic and social dynamics evolve, the fixed separation of areas may hinder the city's ability to respond effectively to new demands and trends.
      • Example: The Downtown Retail Desert, characterized by strict zoning regulations reserving extensive downtown areas exclusively for commercial use, results in vacant storefronts as rigid zoning impedes the transformation of unused retail spaces into mixed-use developments, perpetuating vacancy, diminishing urban vibrancy, limiting foot traffic, creating a negative feedback loop, and missing opportunities for economic diversification and innovation in city centers.
  • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
    • Main idea 1: A city arranged on the basis of clearly-defined functional areas can make people’s life much easier and more efficient   
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Functional zoning allows for the efficient allocation of resources by concentrating similar activities in specific areas. 
        • This can lead to optimized infrastructure development, reducing the wastage of resources.
      • Example: if all government offices are located in the same area,they will save tremendous amount of time when they need to get their bureaucratic paperwork completed (HOẶC: When we want to buy a specific model of computer, for example, we can simply visit the city’s hi-tech market)  
    • Main idea 2: it is convenient for government to manage the areas when the areas are built for some specific purpose separately.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • When areas are built for specific purposes, such as residential, commercial, or industrial zones, it allows for more efficient allocation of resources. 
        • The government can tailor its services and infrastructure development based on the unique needs of each area.
      • Example: The educational authorities can be established in the area where the schools are located. 
  • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)

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