Phân tích essay"An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause ? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh hướng dẫn thêm cách phân tích cũng như bài sửa kĩ càng của học sinh IELTS TUTOR đã đi thi ngày 22/8 nhé, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích bài essay về "brain drain" An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause ? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation? IELTS WRITING TASK 2

An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause ? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng bài này là dạng 2 questions thì dạng này IELTS TUTOR đã hướng dẫn quá nhiều lần rồi nhé:
  • Body 1: trả lời câu hỏi What problems does this cause ?
    • Main idea 1: One of the major problems caused by such brain-drain is the shortage of skilled professionals which makes it difficult for poor countries to achieve economic development and improve the living standards of their poor people.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  từ vựng & cấu trúc thường dùng dạng cause - effect
      • Supporting idea: Due to lack of skilled professionals such as doctors and teachers, the citizens of these countries may struggle to get basic facilities such as medical services and education. 
      • Example: 
        • Many remote areas in Vietnam have a limited number of medical professionals, making it challenging for residents to access basic healthcare services. As a result, people living in these regions may have to travel long distances to receive medical attention or may not receive proper medical care at all, which can lead to adverse health outcomes.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách paraphrase từ"area"(Diễn đạt"khu vực" tiếng anh) 
        • Similarly, the shortage of qualified teachers in some areas may make it difficult for students to receive quality education, leading to a lack of opportunities for personal and professional growth.
    • Main idea 2: Because of such migration of professionals, poor countries depend on foreign technical aid which costs them billions of dollars and further aggravates their economic instability issues  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "cause" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: Poor economic conditions will exacerbate poverty, lead to unemployment and ultimately disintegrate the nation.
      • Example: Many Vietnamese engineers and technical professionals migrate to other countries in search of better job opportunities and higher salaries. As a result, Vietnam is left with a shortage of skilled professionals in the field, which leads to a reliance on foreign technical aid.
  • Body 2: trả lời câu hỏi What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?
    • Main idea 1: The government can offer better salaries along with incentives to skilled professionals to entice them to live and work in their country (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the government should make the salary of professionals equivalent to what is being paid in developed countries)
      • Supporting idea:  People who perform well in their respective fields of study should be honoured with awards and incentives  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng "meanwhile" tiếng anh
      • Example: "Vietnam Talent" program was launched by the Vietnamese government to attract Vietnamese scientists and researchers who are currently working abroad to come back to their home country. The program offers various incentives, including higher salaries, better working conditions, and research grants, to entice these skilled professionals to return to Vietnam and contribute to the country's development.
    • Main idea 2: The government should reward the deserving candidates with scholarships and increase facilities for research-oriented activities
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Scholarships can help to promote access to education and provide opportunities for talented individuals who may not have the financial means to pursue higher education.
        • By increasing facilities for research-oriented activities, the government can promote the growth of research and innovation ecosystems in the country, which can attract investments, create new industries, and stimulate economic growth.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "promote"
      • Example: 
        • Nowadays, schools in Vietnam are adopting latest technology similar to other developed countries
        • "Vietnam National University, Hanoi" (VNU) Scholarship Program is designed to provide financial assistance to deserving students and researchers pursuing higher education at the VNU. The scholarship covers tuition fees, accommodation expenses, and research grants, among other things.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "accommodation" tiếng anh
• IELTS TUTOR lưu ý là 2 solutions sẽ tương ứng với 2 causes nhé!

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