Giải đề"During holidays or weekends, young people spend less time on outdoor activities in the natural environment, such as hiking and mountain climbing. Why? What can be done to encourage them to go out?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Bài sửa đề thi IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ngày 22/8/2020 của HS đi thi đạt 7.0 writing, IELTS TUTOR Giải đề"During holidays or weekends, young people spend less time on outdoor activities in the natural environment, such as hiking and mountain climbing. Why? What can be done to encourage them to go out?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

During holidays or weekends, young people spend less time on outdoor activities in the natural environment, such as hiking and mountain climbing. Why? What can be done to encourage them to go out?

IELTS TUTOR tổng hợp từ vựng topic outdoor activity

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Cần phải đọc rất kĩ đề này nhé:
  • Đề nhấn mạnh là  young people nên nếu trong bài nói chung chung hoặc nói old people vào là sai đề 
  • Đề cho là outdoor activities in the natural environment nên nếu cho ví dụ không liên quan đến natural environment thì cũng sẽ sai 

• Dạng 2 question thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé

• Với dạng 2 question thì sẽ chia bố cục như sau:
  • Body 1: trả lời câu hỏi Why?
    • Có thể triển khai 2 main ideas như sau:
      • Cause 1: vì young people quá bận rộn không có thời gian nghỉ ngơi 
        • Main idea: Academic pressures, extracurricular activities, and other commitments can leave young people with limited free time. 
          • Supporting idea: When they do have time off, they may prefer to relax indoors rather than engage in more physically demanding outdoor activities.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
          • Example: Given a busy schedule filled with honors classes, sports, and a part-time job, a high school student may choose to spend their limited weekend free time unwinding indoors, catching up on sleep, watching movies, or enjoying a quiet day at home instead of engaging in physically demanding outdoor activities.

      • Cause 2: young people thích các hoạt động giải trí online hơn là outdoor activities in the natural environment
        • Main idea: The widespread use of smartphones, tablets, and computers can lead young people to spend more time indoors engaging in screen-based activities rather than outdoor pursuits.
          • Supporting idea: 
            • The prevalence of video games, social media, and online entertainment can lead to prolonged periods of inactivity. 
            • This shift towards sedentary behavior has been associated with an increased risk of health issues such as obesity, cardiovascular problems, and musculoskeletal issues among the younger population.
          • Example: For instance, a study conducted by the World Health Organization (WHO) highlighted that excessive screen time and lack of physical activity are linked to an increased prevalence of obesity in children and adolescents.
  • Body 1: trả lời câu hỏi What can be done to encourage them to go out? (lưu ý là solutions ở đây sẽ ứng với causes trong body 1)
    • Có thể triển khai 2 main ideas (ứng với 2 main ideas ở body causes) như sau:
      • Solution 1: young people có thể học thêm cách quản lí thời gian hiệu quả hơn để cân bằng work life balance 
        • Main idea: Young people can learn additional ways to manage their time more effectively to achieve a better work-life balance.
          • Supporting idea: Developing time management skills enables young people to prioritize tasks, reduce stress, and enhance overall well-being.
          • Example: A college student, managing classes, part-time work, and social activities, can significantly improve their work-life balance through effective time management, allocating specific time slots for each responsibility. This approach not only aids in meeting academic and work commitments but also ensures ample time for relaxation and socializing, contributing to a more balanced and fulfilling lifestyle. 
      • Solution 2: báo đài có thể tuyên truyền là việc online nhiều quá có tác hại cả về thể chất lẫn tinh thần so với outdoor activities in the natural environment
        • Main idea: The media can advocate that excessive online activities can have adverse effects on both physical and mental well-being compared to outdoor activities in the natural environment.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
          • Example: A study conducted by the World Health Organization (WHO) revealed that sedentary lifestyles have become a global health concern, with a significant rise in the prevalence of obesity and related health conditions. The lack of outdoor activities and physical exercise, often replaced by extended periods of online engagement, has been identified as a key factor in these health issues.

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