Giải đề"In some cities, the government has tried to reduce traffic by a congestion tax during rush hours. Is this positive or negative?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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In some cities, the government has tried to reduce traffic by a congestion tax during rush hours. Is this positive or negative?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Bài này thuộc dạng opinion essay nên nếu IELTS TUTOR cho rằng negative development thì sẽ bố cục bài như sau:
  • Intro câu 2: việc In some cities, the government has tried to reduce traffic by a congestion tax during rush hours sẽ là negative vì những lí do sau: 
  • Body 1: lí do số 1 vì sao sự việc trên là negative   
    • Main idea:  It limits their convenience to travel    >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "decrease" tiếng anh
    • Supporting  idea: Some professionals are forced to work in certain shifts due to their job requirements. This is largely non-negotiable and hence they cannot help/avoid traveling during the peak hours of the day. 
    • Supporting  idea: There are also travels made in case of medical and other emergencies.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  cách dùng "in the event that ", "in the event of "
    • Example:  For example, a nurse who works a 7 pm to 7 am shift may have difficulty finding a bus or train to take them to work. Similarly, a parent who needs to take their child to the hospital may have difficulty finding a taxi or ride-sharing service during peak hours.
  • Body 2: lí do số 2 vì sao sự việc trên là negative
    • Main idea:  This adds financial  burden to the general public (HOẶC: it can impact the economic stability of an individual / This will result in an excessive financial burden on the working class and have huge economic implications for society at large)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ "outweigh" tiếng anh 
    • Supporting  idea: Regular travellers at peak hours will have to keep aside a considerable proportion of money every month from their earnings to pay the congestion tax. Many of these people are already paying road tax, vehicle tax, pollution and insurance  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "proportion" tiếng anh 
    • Example:  In a city with a newly implemented congestion tax, a family of four, whose parents rely on public transportation for their downtown commutes, faces the prospect of an extra $50 per week in transportation costs. This added financial burden poses challenges in covering essential expenses like groceries, housing, and healthcare.

  • Conclusion: paraphrase intro câu 2 

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