Phân tích đề"People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh hướng dẫn phương pháp học IELTS SPEAKING siêu hiệu quả, IELTS TUTOR Phân tích đề"People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• sugar-based drinks = sugary drinks = soft drinks = drinks containing high amounts of sugar

• have drinks = consume drinks = ingest drinks

• reason = cause = factor = explanation

• solution = answer

• cause (v) = bring about = result in

• solve (v) = tackle = address = alleviate

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng bài này thuộc dạng 2 question essay mà IELTS TUTOR đã hướng dẫn rất kĩ, đối với dạng này có thể chia bố cục như sau:
  • Body 1: trả lời câu hỏi 1 What are the reasons? 
  • Body 2: trả lời câu hỏi 2 What are the solutions to make people drink less?

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• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: such drinks provide extra energy, increase mental alertness and help consumers to maintain high concentration necessary for their work.   (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: many people might need sugar and other addictive properties found in most sugary drinks to make them feel much more energetic)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Phân biệt INCREASE động từ & INCREASE danh từ
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Most modern jobs are becoming more and more demanding and require people to spend greater effort to succeed, consequently leading to the popularity of sugar-based drinks
        • Once they mentally associate soft drinks as a source of energy, they might become too dependent that they even consume them excessively, let alone giving up the habit of overconsuming such drinks.   (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: sugar is so addictive that many people find it impossible to quit consuming soft drinks or other sugar-based beverages)
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: Another reason is the widespread beverage marketing as beverage companies spend heavily promoting sugary drinks to consumers, especially children  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "narrow" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • There have been advertisements for sugar-containing drinks on television and the Internet, targeting children without any words warning about the fact that sweetened drinks have contributed to the obesity epidemic.
      • Example: Sedentary lifestyles and convenient but nutrient-poor meals which include sugar-based drinks like Coca-Cola or Pepsi are being favored by a large number of people.
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
    • Main idea 1: there should be more educational propagation campaigns that encourage people to follow healthy dietary guidelines and lifestyles and to refrain from using sugar-based drinks.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ"encourage"tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: a number of actions such as restriction of marketing of sugary products to children could be taken to discourage people from drinking sugary beverages.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • it is necessary to require transparent product labelling to point out addictive and unhealthy ingredients contained in the drinks so that consumers can make a more informative choice.
        • There should be more programmes, billboards and posters that educate on healthy eating and the health risks associated with the excessive consumption of sugar-based beverages.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Paraphrase từ"teach"(Diễn đạt"dạy học"tiếng anh)
      • Example: 

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