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Bên cạnh phân tích đề thi thật IELTS WRITING TASK 2 dạng Advantages & Disadvantages, IELTS TUTOR Phân tích đề essay về "movie stars & famous people in the history" IELTS WRITING TASK 2
I. Đề bài
Many young people today know more about international pop and movie stars than about famous people in the history in their country. Why is this? What can be done to increase young people’s interest in famous people in the history of their country?
II. Từ vựng
- Từ vựng topic History & Từ vựng topic Famous people IELTS TUTOR đã tổng hợp
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Dạng này thuộc dạng 2 question essay IELTS TUTOR đã có hướng dẫn kĩ
- Body 1: trả lời câu hỏi Why is this? có thể triển khai
- Main idea 1: Social media contributes to the increasing interest of young people in celebrities. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải thích: Contribute to sth
- Supporting idea: Since teenagers now spend most of their spare time surfing the Internet, they are likely to be exposed to ubiquitous posts or articles about actors or singers more frequently, thus becoming more fascinated about such topics (the media flood their channels with entertainment news, resulting in an increased public awareness of both foreign and domestic celebrities)
- Example:
- Main idea 2: The tedious teaching method of history at high school makes students suffer from utter boredom
- Supporting idea: History teachers fail to make history lessons more interesting. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Các cách nói "Làm ai đó bị gì" (make sb adj) trong IELTS
- Example:
- Main idea 1: Social media contributes to the increasing interest of young people in celebrities. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải thích: Contribute to sth
- Body 2: trả lời câu hỏi What can be done to increase young people’s interest in famous people in the history of their country? có thể triển khai
- Main idea 1: Governments could collaborate with the media to publish more engaging history-related content >> youngsters will gain more knowledge about a particular historical period by watching this content.
- Supporting idea:
- Example: Film makers should be encouraged to produce movies based on key historical events. Young people will be eager to watch such movies, especially when their idols are chosen for the starring role.
- Main idea 2: Education authorities should improve the way history is taught (the teaching method in history classroom should be tailored in order to arouse students’ interests) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "improve" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea: The history curriculum should largely consist of interactive activities such as visiting historic places and discussing historical events after watching related documentaries.
- Example: Instead of teaching merely a long list of names and dates in textbooks, teachers can add motion images and vivid sound effects to create more appealing lessons.
- Main idea 1: Governments could collaborate with the media to publish more engaging history-related content >> youngsters will gain more knowledge about a particular historical period by watching this content.
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