Bên cạnh phân tích đề thi thật IELTS WRITING TASK 2 dạng Advantages & Disadvantages, IELTS TUTOR Phân tích & Bài sửa đề"To improve the quality of education, people think that we should encourage our students to evaluate and criticize their teachers. Others believe that it will result in a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion" IELTS WRITING TASK 2
I. Đề bài
To improve the quality of education, people think that we should encourage our students to evaluate and criticize their teachers. Others believe that it will result in a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
II. Từ vựng
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Từ vựng topic education
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Dạng bài này thuộc dạng Discuss both views and give your own opinion mà IELTS TUTOR đã hướng dẫn kĩ
- Nếu quan điểm của IELTS TUTOR đồng ý với quan điểm số 2 it will result in a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom thì ở câu 2 intro & conclusion cũng phải nêu rõ quan điểm là đồng ý với quan điểm số 2 nhé, thân bài sẽ bố cục như sau
- Body 1: viết về quan điểm số 1 To improve the quality of education, people think that we should encourage our students to evaluate and criticize their teachers. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Từ vựng topic "CRITICISING TEACHERS" IELTS
- Main idea: Feedback from learners may contribute to an improvement in educational quality (HOẶC: this kind of feedback can be used to improve teachers’ performance)
- Supporting idea: Without the comments of students, it would be difficult to know whether the speed of the lesson is appropriate for the class, which may eventually impair the quality of the lesson (HOẶC: Teaching methods can only be successful if they are student-centered >> Listening to the students’ constructive suggestions, teachers will have a better idea of what students’ needs are and can then adjust their teaching to meet them). >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "Without" trong câu điều kiện
- Example:
- Main idea: Feedback from learners may contribute to an improvement in educational quality (HOẶC: this kind of feedback can be used to improve teachers’ performance)
- Body 2: viết về quan điểm số 2 (quan điểm mình đồng ý) it will result in a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom
- Main idea 1: Students are unable to evaluate their teachers’ performance in a sound way
- Supporting idea: Students are very young and, compared with their teachers, are less knowledgeable both in theory and practice on a subject. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng in comparison with / compared to/with
- Example:
- Main idea 2: Student assessment would lead to poor discipline in the classroom.
- Supporting idea: If each of the students is allowed to comment on the teacher’s performance, then there would be chaos in the classroom. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "allow" tiếng anh
- Example:
- Main idea 1: Students are unable to evaluate their teachers’ performance in a sound way
- Body 1: viết về quan điểm số 1 To improve the quality of education, people think that we should encourage our students to evaluate and criticize their teachers. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Từ vựng topic "CRITICISING TEACHERS" IELTS
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