Bên cạnh phân tích đề thi thật IELTS WRITING TASK 2 dạng Advantages & Disadvantages, IELTS TUTOR Phân tích đề"It is shown that many criminals have a low level of education. Some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate them in prison so that they can find a job after they leave prison. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (ĐỀ THI 30/9/2022)
I. Đề bài
It is shown that many criminals have a low level of education. Some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate them in prison so that they can find a job after they leave prison. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
II. Từ vựng
- Từ vựng topic Crime IELTS TUTOR tổng hợp
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Cách trả lời dạng câu hỏi này đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé:
- Nếu theo hướng totally agree với quan điểm đề cho là the best way to reduce crime is to educate them in prison so that they can find a job after they leave prison thì sẽ chia bố cục như sau:
- Body 1: Lí do thứ 1 vì sao đồng ý với quan điểm đề cho
- Main idea: Learning will occupy their time in prison and consequently, they will have no time for negative thoughts >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Từ vựng topic Rules / laws & court IELTS
- Supporting idea:
- Since they have plenty of time in jail, they can use it to learn a course or a skill and become educated, which will help them after they have served their sentence.
- These offenders’ minds will be less inclined to engage in illegal activities if they spend their free time learning.
- Example:
- Body 2: Lí do thứ 2 vì sao đồng ý với quan điểm đề cho
- Main idea: Employability skills and basic understanding of how to make money will help offenders gain confidence in their ability to become a good person and reintegrate with the society >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Crime, a crime hay Crimes và cách dùng trong tiếng anh
- Supporting idea:
- After coming back home, the acquired knowledge gives them the confidence to face the world and a goal to achieve in life.
- The lack of education amongst prisoners is the main cause behind the escalation in violent crimes.
- Prisoners can get a chance to learn and work while carrying out their sentences, which will also help them to sustain themselves after they’ve completed their term >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "murder" tiếng anh
- Example:
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