Bên cạnh hướng dẫn thêm cách phân tích cũng như bài sửa kĩ càng của học sinh IELTS TUTOR đã đi thi ngày 22/8 nhé, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích bài essay dạng Map "The diagram below shows the changes of a village in 1995 and now" IELTS WRITING TASK 1
1. ĐỀ BÀI
The diagram below shows the changes of a village in 1995 and now
2. TỪ VỰNG & CÁCH VIẾT DẠNG MAP
Hướng dẫn cách viết dạng Map của IELTS TUTOR
3. PHÂN TÍCH BÀI NÀY
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Dạng gì: map
- Chủ ngữ của bài: the changes of a village in 1995 and now >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "change" tiếng anh
- Chia thì gì, vì sao: năm 1995 thì chia quá khứ, kéo dài đến hiện tại chia hiện tại hoàn thành
- Câu Overall: 2 đặc điểm
- Có nhiều thay đổi, có những cái biến mất như là forest park, trong khi đó có nhiều cái tăng thêm như housing
- IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt:
- The village has witnessed significant changes with the disappearance of most green-land zones over the time (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: this area has become less environment-friendly)
- More service-related areas have been constructed to meet the demand of growing population and tourism over the years. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Paraphrase danh từ "change" tiếng anh
- Bố cục cách viết 2 đoạn thân bài
- Năm 1995:
- The village was situated to the North of the sea.
- There was a main road running along the sea from West to East, and another running from South-East to North-West.
- As can be seen in the northeast, there used to be a forest park along with the farmland in 1995 which have been replaced by golf and tennis areas >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "change" tiếng anh
- Present (nhớ có so sánh những điểm khác biệt của năm 1995 và present)
- The northwest has undergone the expansion of a road and the birth of some houses although the main road has stayed intact, running from the west till the beach area.
- A series of shops and fish markets have been demolished to pave the way for restaurants and apartments by the side of the beach in the southwest. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng & paraphrase từ "Vary" tiếng anh
- The fishing port near the ocean has also vanished.
- The hotel and café, in the northeast, have still stood opposite despite the birth of a car park by the side of the former.
- Năm 1995:
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
The given map illustrates the transformations of a village from 1995 to the present.
Overall, the village has undergone notable changes with a significant reduction in green areas and an increase in housing and service-related facilities. Specifically, while features like the forest park have disappeared, new amenities such as housing and recreational areas have emerged.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
In 1995, the village was located to the north of the sea. A main road ran parallel to the sea from west to east, intersected by another road extending from the southeast to the northwest. In the northeast, there was a forest park and farmland, which have since been replaced by golf and tennis courts. The main road has remained unchanged, but the northwest has seen the expansion of roads and the construction of new houses.
Currently, a series of shops and fish markets in the southwest have been demolished to make way for restaurants and apartments. The fishing port near the ocean has also disappeared. In the northeast, the hotel and café still stand opposite each other, with the addition of a car park adjacent to the hotel. These changes reflect the village's shift towards accommodating a growing population and increased tourism.
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