Bên cạnh Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn kĩ thêm Giải đề"The pictures below show the plan of Walton Museum in 2008 and the plan in 2012, after it was redeveloped" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Kèm bài sửa HS IELTS TUTOR)

I. Đề bài 

The plans below show the South Wing of Walton Museum in 2008 and in 2012 after it was redeveloped.

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• Overall:
  • Significant alterations took place within just four years in the South Wing, with substantial modifications occurring throughout except for the specialized exhibition space and the shop.
• Body 1: Viết về map 1
  • In 2008, the South wing comprised two levels, featuring a pathway on its western side.
  • The first floor housed a specialized exhibition area, a retail space, and a cloakroom, while the entrance and reception were situated on the second floor.
  • Stairs connected the shop and cloakroom, and adjacent to the reception was a reading area.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
• Body 2: Viết về map 2
  • By 2012, the structure had expanded to four stories, featuring a lift from the first floor to the top, with an entrance hall constructed above the specialized exhibition room and topped with a terrace.
  • The cloakroom was moved to the reception area and replaced with a children's play zone, while a restaurant was installed above the reception and cloakroom on the western side of the lift.
  • A self-service café was introduced on the second floor, positioned east of the lift above the reading room.
  • An extra exhibition space was constructed on the top floor, situated above the café.

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The two maps illustrate the changes in the layout of Walton Museum between 2008 and 2012 following its redevelopment.

Overall, significant transformations were made in the South Wing over the four years, with major modifications throughout, except for the specialized exhibition area and the shop.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

In 2008, the South Wing consisted of two levels, with a pathway on its western side. The first floor housed a specialized exhibition area, a shop, and a cloakroom, while the entrance and reception were located on the second floor. Stairs connected the shop and cloakroom, and a reading area was adjacent to the reception.

By 2012, the structure had expanded to four floors, including a lift that connected all levels. The entrance hall was constructed above the specialized exhibition room and topped with a terrace. The cloakroom was relocated to the reception area, replaced by a children's play zone, and a restaurant was added on the western side above the reception. Additionally, a self-service café was introduced on the second floor, and a new exhibition space was built on the top floor above the café.

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