Phân tích & sửa đề "The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010" IELTS WRITING TASK 1

Bên cạnh Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi), IELTS TUTOR Phân tích & sửa đề "The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010" IELTS WRITING TASK 1

IELTS Writing Task 1: Map of a City Hospital (IELTS Cambridge 13)

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

Đối với dạng map có thể chia theo bố cục mỗi đoạn thân bài mỗi map như sau:

• Overall: có thể lựa chọn các đặc điểm sau:
  • The main differences in road access to this hospital involve intersection upgrades and the development of parking spaces and bus facilities.
  •  Hoặc (Three main modifications were made to the hospital’s vehicle access. These involved the building of new roundabouts, a new bus station and new parking facilities)>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
• Body 1: mô tả map City Hospital 2007 chú ý những điểm sau: 
  • The hospital road, which had three bus stops on the either side, was connected to the city road and to the ring road. 
  • Staff and visitors used the same car park, which was situated to the east of Hospital Road and accessed via the ring road (hoặc In 2007, there was a small parking lot along Hospital road for both staff and the public)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "situate" tiếng anh
• Body 2: mô tả map City Hospital 2010 chú ý những điểm sau: 
  • The majority of the hospital underwent very little change with the roads (Ring, City, and Hospital road) all  largely the same
  • The most striking change is the appearance of two new roundabouts. The first one was constructed at the three-way junction of the hospital road and the ring road surrounding the hospital while the second one was located at the four-way intersection of the hospital road and the city road.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "locate" tiếng anh
  • The six bus stops, situated along the hospital road, were removed to make way for a new bus station to the western side of this road
  •  In terms of parking spaces, a new public car park was constructed to the eastern side of the hospital and people could access this car park via the ring road, while the old parking lot became a staff-only area.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng "across" tiếng anh

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