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Giải đề"Nowadays more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

November 9, 2023

Bên cạnh phân tích rất kĩ Từ vựng & cấu trúc qua bài báo New sound: Rap gradually goes mainstream in Vietnam (evnexperess) để giúp nâng cao kĩ năng đọc hiểu, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải đề"Nowadays more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

I. Đề bài

Nowadays more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life?

II. Từ vựng

Từ vựng topic having children later in life đã được IELTS TUTOR tổng hợp

III. Phân tích

1. Lưu ý

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

2. Bố cục

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • INTRODUCTION: Giới thiệu qua topic và câu số 2 của introduction không cần nêu reasons và effects cụ thể là gì ra mà chỉ cần nói There are some reasons for this tendency, and it could have some impacts on family life as well as society chung chung là đủ cho dạng này 
  • BODY 1: Trả lời cho câu hỏi số 1: What are the reasons? (Luôn nhớ đối với dạng 2 questions thì mỗi đoạn thân bài sẽ trả lời cho 1 câu hỏi)   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Paraphrase từ "reason" tiếng anh
    • Thông thường nên nêu ra 2 reasons, không nên cố list cho nhiều reasons ra, mà chỉ cần nêu kĩ lưỡng 2 reasons, và trong mỗi reasons phải nêu cho rõ Main idea >> Supporting ideas >> Example 
    • Trong một vài topic quá khó nghĩ ra ý có thể chỉ cần viết 1 reason cũng được, 
  • BODY 2: Trả lời cho câu hỏi số 2: What are the effects on society and family life? (Luôn nhớ đối với dạng 2 questions thì mỗi đoạn thân bài sẽ trả lời cho 1 câu hỏi) 
  • CONCLUSION: Khẳng định lại câu trả lời của 2 câu hỏi, tức là paraphrase lại câu số 2 của INTRODUCTION

3. Tham khảo cách viết

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi "What are the reasons"
    • Main idea 1: The fact that pregnancy has been more common in older women stems from late marriage 
      • Supporting idea: Late marriage would help singles have more time to seek a stable job and broaden behavioral experience before deciding to live with someone forever >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách paraphrase từ "HELP" trong tiếng anh
      • Example: My aunt - Sarah, 35, happily married with a fulfilling job and a love for travel, cautiously considers the risks of pregnancy at her age, leading her and her husband to wait a few more years before starting a family.
    • Main idea 2: It is widely believed that children are raised better by older parents
      • Supporting idea: TYING THE KNOT EARLY, in some cases, would cause constant quarrels about rights of child-rearing between young couples due to their immature thoughts on marital values ><  DELAYED MARRIAGE may secure better conditions for children’s future (HOẶC: older fathers and mothers are generally wealthier, more experienced, and more willing to take the responsibility of bringing up a child)   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Paraphrase từ "lead to" tiếng anh
      • Example: My friend - John and Mary, married at 20, had a child early but, realizing their unpreparedness for parenthood, chose divorce to provide a more stable environment for their child amid constant disagreements.
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi "What are the effects on society and family life"
    • Main idea 1: (Nên viết về family life): having children later will cause a significant age gap between the two generations.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách paraphrase "find out / discover/learn" IELTS
      • Supporting idea: This makes it harder for parents to understand and communicate with their offspring
      • Example: My uncle faced communication challenges with their adolescent kids due to a substantial age gap, having opted for parenthood in their late 40s.
    • Main idea 2: (Nên viết về society) Having children when reaching over 35 can affect pregnancy due to aging health >> This might adversely affect the quality of the future workforce if too many people decide to follow this trend
      • Supporting idea:  Babies are not healthy enough or even die premature death because mothers' health will decline (HOẶC: when an aged couple decides to give birth, there are serious health risks for the woman in the prenatal and postnatal period)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic Family (child education, child birth...) IELTS
      • Example: In Japan, the rising average age of first-time mothers, reaching 30.9 years in 2020 from 25.6 in 1970, is worrisome as it correlates with an increased risk of health issues in babies, with twice the rate of premature births among mothers over 35 compared to those under 30.

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