Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Governments should make people responsible for looking after their own local environment. Do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Thi máy 9/3/2022)
I. Đề bài
Governments should make people responsible for looking after their own local environment. Do you agree or disagree?
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Từ vựng Topic Environment
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
- Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
- Main idea: the Earth faces potential catastrophe is because of over-population and consumer habits caused by humans >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng HUMAN và HUMANS tiếng anh
- Supporting idea:
- As responsible social beings, it is their duty to make necessary arrangements for the waste management in their own environment >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "environment" tiếng anh
- There would be a noticeable improvement if individuals were forced to recycle, clean up litter in their neighborhoods and reduce their carbon footprint by not using private vehicles, single-use plastics, and airplanes.
- Example: The Great Pacific Garbage Patch, a massive collection of primarily plastic marine debris in the North Pacific Ocean, is directly linked to human activity, with our growing population generating vast amounts of plastic waste that often ends up in the oceans due to improper disposal and inadequate waste management infrastructure.
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea: the Earth faces potential catastrophe is because of over-population and consumer habits caused by humans >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng HUMAN và HUMANS tiếng anh
- Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY
- Main idea: individual actions can prove more effective than we think (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: individuals can play an important role towards environmental protection)
- Supporting idea: If each avoid driving their own car for short journeys, and take public transportation, walk or cycle instead, the use of fossil fuels and the level of contaminated air will be reduced >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vựng & Ideas topic "Fossil Fuels" IELTS
- Example: people can stop using plastic bags as it is a hazardous pollutant of the soil, and they take eco-friendly substitutes such as paper or cloth bags into consideration.
- Main idea: individual actions can prove more effective than we think (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: individuals can play an important role towards environmental protection)
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
Governments should make people responsible for looking after their own local environment. I totally agree with this statement because individual actions are crucial in mitigating environmental issues, and personal responsibility can lead to more effective and sustainable environmental practices.
Firstly, one of the primary reasons the Earth faces potential catastrophe is due to over-population and consumer habits caused by humans. As responsible social beings, it is our duty to manage waste in our own environments. If individuals were compelled to recycle, clean up litter in their neighborhoods, and reduce their carbon footprint by not using private vehicles, single-use plastics, and airplanes, there would be a noticeable improvement in environmental quality. For instance, the Great Pacific Garbage Patch, a massive collection of primarily plastic marine debris in the North Pacific Ocean, is directly linked to human activity. Our growing population generates vast amounts of plastic waste that often ends up in the oceans due to improper disposal and inadequate waste management infrastructure.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
Secondly, individual actions can prove more effective than we might think in protecting the environment. If each person avoids driving their own car for short journeys and instead opts for public transportation, walking, or cycling, the use of fossil fuels and the level of contaminated air would be significantly reduced. Additionally, people can stop using plastic bags, which are hazardous pollutants of the soil, and consider eco-friendly substitutes such as paper or cloth bags. For example, a community that collectively decides to minimize the use of plastic bags can dramatically reduce local soil and water pollution, showcasing the power of individual actions in achieving broader environmental goals.
In conclusion, making people responsible for their local environments is a practical and effective approach to environmental conservation.
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