Giải đề"With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitat and some are even threatened to the point of extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What measure can be taken to deal with this problem?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitat and some are even threatened to the point of extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What measure can be taken to deal with this problem?

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  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea: Preserving biodiversity and maintaining a balanced ecosystem are essential for the well-being of the planet and all its inhabitants, including humans. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Supporting idea: The loss of animal species can disrupt ecosystems, affect food chains, and lead to long-term environmental consequences.
      • Example: The common apple depends on bees and other pollinators to transfer pollen between flowers, facilitating fruit production, and a decrease in bee populations resulting from habitat loss, pesticide use, and diseases can substantially affect apple yields.
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 - To effectively tackle the challenges of habitat loss and illegal hunting, a multifaceted approach is necessary. 
    • Main idea 1: Conservation efforts must begin with the preservation of natural habitats. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Rigorous regulations should be enacted and enforced to safeguard these areas from deforestation and unplanned urbanization. 
        • Establishing and expanding protected zones, national parks, and wildlife reserves are instrumental in providing safe havens for endangered species to thrive.
      • Example: In the case of Costa Rica, a small Central American nation celebrated for its lush rainforests and rich biodiversity, the country successfully countered deforestation and habitat loss in the 1970s by implementing stringent regulations, including laws against deforestation and illegal logging enforced by dedicated park rangers and environmental authorities, alongside the establishment of a extensive network of protected zones covering over 25% of the landmass
    • Main idea 2: Addressing illegal hunting requires a concerted effort involving stringent law enforcement and increased penalties for wildlife crimes. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Collaborative international initiatives should be fostered to combat the global nature of illegal wildlife trade. 
        • By coordinating efforts, nations can share resources, intelligence, and best practices to curtail the demand for exotic animal products and enforce stricter regulations.
      • Example: South Africa's successful campaign against rhino poaching, which once posed a severe threat to the majestic creatures, showcases the effectiveness of coordinated efforts, including strict law enforcement with dedicated anti-poaching units utilizing advanced technology like drones and sniffer dogs, along with well-trained rangers collaborating with local communities to gather intelligence and foster trust.

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