Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải đề"The table below shows the proportion of the workforce who are women and the proportion of managers who are women in five different countries."IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 29/8/2023)
I. Đề bài
The table below shows the proportion of the workforce who are women and the proportion of managers who are women in five different countries.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
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- Overall:
- Female workers constitute a smaller percentage compared to their male counterparts
- There is relatively higher gender equality in the surveyed English-speaking countries, especially in managerial roles.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
- Body 1: Australia + US
- The United States and Australia have the highest representation of women in professional work, with 46% of employees and 43% of managers being female in the former, and 42% of employees and 43% of managers being female in the latter.
- Body 2: Srilanka + Japan + Egypt
- While the two Asian countries (Srilanka and Japan) have substantial female workforces, with Japan having 48% women in the workforce, managerial positions in these countries are largely dominated by men (over 80%). >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
- An even more significant gender disparity is evident in Egypt, where women hold no more than 20% of positions at any professional level.
- Overall:
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
The table illustrates the proportion of women in the workforce and in managerial roles across five countries: Australia, the United States, Sri Lanka, Japan, and Egypt.
Overall, while women are well-represented in the workforce in some countries, their representation in managerial roles often lags behind. Notably, English-speaking countries show higher gender equality in managerial positions compared to the other nations.
In the United States and Australia, women constitute a significant share of the workforce and management. In the US, 46% of employees and 43% of managers are women, while in Australia, women account for 42% of the workforce and an equal 43% in managerial roles, indicating progress toward gender parity.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
Conversely, Sri Lanka, Japan, and Egypt display stark gender disparities. Japan has the highest percentage of female workers (48%) but sees a dramatic drop in female managers, with over 80% of such positions held by men. Sri Lanka reveals a similar trend. Egypt demonstrates the greatest inequality, with women occupying less than 20% of roles in both the workforce and management.
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