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I. Đề bài
The table below shows the percentage of working men and women in different areas of employment in one country in 1986, 1996 and 2006
II. Kiến thức liên quan
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III. Phân tích
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- Overall:
- Overall, education consistently employed the highest percentage of women, while the manufacturing industry saw a significant decrease in male employment over the years.
- Both genders showed stable employment rates in the catering sector.
- Body 1: Viết về Men
- In 1986, the majority of men were employed in manufacturing (32%), followed by catering (16%), education (13%), and banking (11%). >> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
- By 2006, there was a notable shift: the manufacturing sector's male employment dropped to 17%, while banking and education saw modest increases to 21% and 15%, respectively. Catering remained stable at 22%.
- Body 2: Viết về Women
- For women, education was the dominant employment sector, starting at 33% in 1986 and rising steadily to 38% by 2006. The catering sector remained constant at 26% throughout the period.
- Banking saw a gradual increase from 12% in 1986 to 19% in 2006, whereas the manufacturing sector experienced a decline from 18% to 6%.
- Overall:
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
The table illustrates the percentage of men and women employed in various sectors—catering, banking, manufacturing, and education—across the years 1986, 1996, and 2006 in a certain country.
Overall, education consistently employed the highest percentage of women, while the manufacturing industry saw a significant decrease in male employment over the years. In addition, both genders showed stable employment rates in the catering sector.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 2 (dạng advantages & disadvantages) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
In 1986, the majority of men were employed in manufacturing (32%), followed by catering (16%), education (13%), and banking (11%). By 2006, there was a notable shift: the manufacturing sector's male employment dropped to 17%, while banking and education saw modest increases to 21% and 15%, respectively. Catering remained stable at 22%.
For women, education was the dominant employment sector, starting at 33% in 1986 and rising steadily to 38% by 2006. The catering sector remained constant at 26% throughout the period. Banking saw a gradual increase from 12% in 1986 to 19% in 2006, whereas the manufacturing sector experienced a decline from 18% to 6%.
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