Giải đề"The table below provides information on marriage status and age from 1960 to 2000 in Australia"IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi 2/12/2023 + 28/5/2024)

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The table below provides information on marriage status and age from 1960 to 2000 in Australia

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  • Overall:
    • The peak of religion-based marriages occurred in 1980, while civil matrimonies reached their highest point in 2000. 
    • The age at which both girls and boys entered into marriage showed a consistent upward trend over the 40-year period.
  • Body 1: Viết về Religion Marriage + Civil Marriage
    • Religion-based weddings in 1980 recorded the highest number at 50,000, surpassing the figures of less than 30,000 in both 1960 and 1970 and exceeding those in 1990 and 2000. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • Conversely, civil weddings exhibited a gradual increase over time, with the lowest count in 1960 at 8,000 and the highest in 2000 at 40,000.
  • Body 2: Viết về The average age of bride + The average age of bridegroom
    • Concerning the age at marriage for females, it started at 21 years in 1960 and increased by 2 or 3 years in each subsequent decade, reaching 30 years in 2000. 
    • The age for bridegrooms followed a comparable trend, rising from 24 years in 1960 to 32 years in 2000.

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The table provides data on marriage status and age in Australia from 1960 to 2000.

Overall, religion-based marriages peaked in 1980, whereas civil marriages reached their highest point in 2000. Additionally, the age at which both women and men entered into marriage showed a consistent upward trend over the 40-year period.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

In 1980, religion-based weddings recorded their highest number at 50,000, surpassing the figures of less than 30,000 in both 1960 and 1970 and exceeding those in 1990 and 2000. Conversely, civil weddings exhibited a gradual increase over time, with the lowest count in 1960 at 8,000 and the highest in 2000 at 40,000.

Regarding the average age at the time of marriage, in Australia, during the 1960s, men typically married around 24 years old, three years earlier than women who married at 21. Over the following decades, the average marriage age for both genders went up by one to three years every ten years. By the end of this period, men were getting married at 32 and women at 30.​

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