Giải đề"The pie charts show the reasons for immigrants to a European country in 2009 and reasons for immigrants from a European country in 2009" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi giấy 17/8/2024)

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The pie charts show the reasons for immigrants to a European country in 2009 and reasons for immigrants from a European country in 2009

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  • Overall:
    • Accompanying family or loved ones was the primary incentive for many individuals relocating to a European country, whereas a specific job opportunity was the primary driver for immigrants from a European nation in 2009. 
    • Relatively few individuals cited no specific reason for their immigration to or from the European country.
  • Body 1: Viết pie số 1 
    • Accompanying family or loved ones constituted a quarter of the total, surpassing other reasons by 10%, followed closely by definite employment at 23%. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 1 (Complaint letter) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
    • Pursuit of a new job accounted for 15%, the same percentage as motivations for education and other miscellaneous reasons. 
    • Those immigrating without a clear motive represented 7% of the total population.
  • Body 2: Viết pie số 2
    • Definite employment surpassed accompanying family or loved ones as the predominant factor driving immigration from a European country, at 38%. 
    • This was followed by other miscellaneous reasons at 23%, which was 8% higher than accompanying family and 10% higher than job-seeking. 
    • Pursuit of education and lack of a specific motive to relocate to a European country constituted the smallest proportions, at 7% and 4%, respectively.

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The pie charts illustrate the reasons for immigration to and from a European country in 2009.

Overall, accompanying family or loved ones was the primary reason for immigrating to the country, whereas definite employment was the main factor driving people to leave. Notably, very few individuals cited no specific reason for their migration in either direction.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

To begin, 25% of those immigrating to the European country did so to join family or loved ones, making it the leading reason, followed closely by definite employment at 23%. The pursuit of a new job, education, and other miscellaneous reasons each accounted for 15%. Meanwhile, only 7% of individuals moved without a clear motive.

In contrast, the most significant reason for leaving the country was definite employment, which made up 38%. Other miscellaneous reasons were next at 23%, followed by accompanying family or loved ones (15%) and job-seeking (13%). Education and lack of a specific motive were the least common reasons, at 7% and 4%, respectively.

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