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I. Đề bài
The pie charts below show the percentage of students on the one adult education centre taking a various courses offered in 1985 and this year
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
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- Overall:
- Body 1: Viết về năm 1985
- Body 2: Viết về this year
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
The provided pie charts illustrate the distribution of students enrolled in various courses at an adult education center in the years 1985 and the current year.
Overall, the comparison highlights a shift towards technology-related courses in recent years, with a decrease in traditional subjects like Modern languages and Art. The consistency in the popularity of Fitness and dance courses is also notable.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
In 1985, Modern languages were the most popular, accounting for 24% of enrollments. This was followed by Fitness and dance at 22%, Art at 17%, Local history at 15%, Cookery at 14%, and Music appreciation at 8%.
In contrast, the current year's data shows a significant shift in preferences, with IT courses, absent in 1985, now dominating at 27%, while Fitness and dance maintain their previous popularity at 22%. Cookery has seen an increase to 19%, whereas Modern languages have decreased to 17%. Art has dropped to 13%, and Local history is no longer listed. Instead, Music appreciation, which is also not listed, seems to have been replaced by the new IT course.
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