Giải đề"The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present."IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi 5/7/2024)

Bên cạnh hướng dẫn thêm cách phân tích cũng như bài sửa kĩ càng của học sinh IELTS TUTOR đã đi thi ngày 22/8 nhé, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải đề"The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present."IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi 5/7/2024)

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng gì: map
• Chủ ngữ của bài: the changes of a village in 1995 and now   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "change" tiếng anh
• Chia thì gì, vì sao: năm 1995 thì chia quá khứ, kéo dài đến hiện tại chia hiện tại hoàn thành 
• Câu Overall: 2 đặc điểm
  • Có nhiều thay đổi, có những cái biến mất như là forest park, trong khi đó có nhiều cái tăng thêm như housing
  • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt:
    • The village has witnessed significant changes with the disappearance of most green-land zones over the time  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: this area has become less environment-friendly)
    • More service-related areas have been constructed to meet the demand of growing population and tourism over the years.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Paraphrase danh từ "change" tiếng anh
• Bố cục cách viết 2 đoạn thân bài
  • Năm 1995:
    • The village was situated to the North of the sea. 
    • There was a main road running along the sea from West to East, and another running from South-East to North-West.
    • As can be seen in the northeast, there used to be a forest park along with the farmland in 1995 which have been replaced by golf and tennis areas  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "change" tiếng anh 
  • Present (nhớ có so sánh những điểm khác biệt của năm 1995 và present)
    • The northwest has undergone the expansion of a road and the birth of some houses although the main road has stayed intact, running from the west till the beach area. 
    • A series of shops and fish markets have been demolished to pave the way for restaurants and apartments by the side of the beach in the southwest.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng & paraphrase từ "Vary" tiếng anh
    • The fishing port near the ocean has also vanished. 
    • The hotel and café, in the northeast, have still stood opposite despite the birth of a car park by the side of the former. 

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The village of Ryemouth has witnessed significant changes since 1995, with many green spaces disappearing and new infrastructure emerging to meet the demands of a growing population and increased tourism.

In 1995, the village was located to the north of the sea, with a main road running from west to east along the coast, and another road intersecting it from southeast to northwest. In the northeast, there was a forest park and farmland, which have now been replaced by a golf course and tennis courts. Additionally, the northwest has seen the expansion of a road and the construction of new houses, although the main road remains unchanged.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

Presently, several shops and fish markets in the southwest have been demolished to make way for restaurants and apartments near the beach, and the fishing port has disappeared. Despite these changes, the hotel and café in the northeast still stand, with a new car park added beside the hotel. Overall, Ryemouth has transformed from a primarily green area to one with more service-oriented facilities.

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