Giải đề"The line graph shows the percentage of different age groups of cinema visitors in a particular country from 1978 to 2008"IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Giải đề thi 25/11/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải đề"The line graph shows the percentage of different age groups of cinema visitors in a particular country from 1978 to 2008"IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Giải đề thi 25/11/2023)

The line graph shows the percentage of different age groups of cinema visitors in a particular country from 1978 to 2008

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  • Overall: 
    • Cinema attendance was most prominent among the younger demographic, with individuals aged 14 to 24 showing the highest affinity for theaters throughout the three decades starting in 1978.
    • The cinema attendance percentage of the 50+ age group rose, while that of other age groups declined.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi)
  • Body 1: Viết về 3 category còn lại có xu hướng giống nhau 
    • The first three age brackets (14–24, 25–34, and 35–49) followed comparable patterns, starting at 90%, 80%, and 60% respectively, and experiencing declines to 75%, 60%, and 40% in 1988.
    • Over the subsequent decade, the percentages rebounded to their initial levels, except for the second group, which remained at 70%. 
    • The younger two groups steadily decreased, with the former reaching 80% and the latter reaching 65%, while concurrently, the proportion of 35-to-49-year-olds declined to 50% in 2008>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
  • Body 2: Viết về age 50+ 
    • The eldest group (50 and above) comprised slightly over 40% in 1978, followed by a decrease to 20% in 1988. 
    • Following a rebound to 40% in 1998, the figure stabilized, and a subsequent 10% increase aligned this group's percentage with that of the 35-49 age category.

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