Bên cạnh Phân tích & Bài Sửa HS đạt 7.0"The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce fertiliser (compost)" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 , IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải đề"The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to Scotland who visited four different attractions in Edinburgh" IELTS WRITING TASK 1

The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to Scotland who visited four different attractions in Edinburgh

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The line graph illustrates the percentage of tourists to Scotland who visited four distinct attractions in Edinburgh between 1980 and 2010. Overall, the castle remained the most popular site throughout the period, while the aquarium experienced the most significant fluctuation.

In 1980, approximately 10% of visitors went to the aquarium, but this figure rose sharply to a peak of around 35% in 1990 before plummeting to less than 10% by 2010. Similarly, the zoo began at 10%, reached 20% in 1990, and then experienced moderate changes, ending at roughly 15%.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

In contrast, the castle’s popularity increased steadily, starting at 25% and peaking at 45% in 1995, before declining slightly to 30% in 2010. Meanwhile, the festival remained the least dynamic, hovering around 30% in 1980 and gradually declining to about 25% by 2010.

1. Percentage - tỷ lệ phần trăm

   • The proportion or amount expressed as a fraction of 100.
   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "The percentage of tourists visiting the castle increased steadily."

2. Fluctuation - sự dao động

   • Irregular changes in data.
   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "The aquarium experienced significant fluctuation over the years."

3. Sharply - mạnh mẽ, nhanh chóng

   • Quickly or suddenly, often used to describe rapid increases or decreases.
   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Tourist numbers rose sharply to a peak."

4. Plummeting - giảm mạnh

   • Falling steeply or suddenly.
   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Visitor numbers to the aquarium plummeted after 1990."

5. Moderate - vừa phải, không lớn

   • Neither too much nor too little; average.
   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "The zoo experienced moderate changes in popularity."

6. Steadily - đều đặn

   • Happening at a consistent and gradual pace.
   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "The castle's popularity increased steadily over time."

7. Dramatic - đột ngột, đáng kể

   • Significant or substantial, often used to emphasize major changes.
   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "The aquarium saw the most dramatic decline in interest."

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