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I. Đề bài
The line graph below gives information about the percentage of women aged 15-64 in employment between 2003 and 2009
II. Kiến thức liên quan
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III. Phân tích
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- The line graph provides data on the employment rates of women aged 15-64 in five countries—Iceland, Canada, Germany, Chile, and Turkey—over the period from 2003 to 2009.
- Overall:
- Iceland consistently had the highest percentage of employed women throughout the given period, while Turkey had the lowest. There were slight fluctuations in the employment rates of women in these countries, but most countries showed a general trend of either steady or slightly increasing employment rates.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
- Body 1: Viết về Iceland + Canada + Germany
- Iceland's employment rate for women remained relatively stable, hovering around 80-85%. It experienced a minor decline towards the end of the period, slightly dropping from approximately 80% in 2003 to just below 80% in 2009.
- Canada and Germany had similar employment rates for women, although Germany started slightly lower. Canada's employment rate remained relatively constant, with a slight increase from around 69% in 2003 to about 70% in 2009. Germany showed a steady rise from just 60% in 2003 to around 65% by the end of the period.
- Body 2: Viết về Chile + Turkey
- Chile exhibited a notable increase in the employment rate of women, rising from approximately 35% in 2003 to about 45% in 2009.
- Turkey, on the other hand, had the lowest employment rates for women, fluctuating slightly around the 20-25% mark.
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
The line graph illustrates the employment rates of women aged 15-64 in Iceland, Canada, Germany, Chile, and Turkey from 2003 to 2009.
Overall, Iceland consistently maintained the highest female employment rates, whereas Turkey had the lowest. While there were slight fluctuations, most countries exhibited either stable or slightly increasing trends in women's employment rates over the period.
In detail, Iceland's employment rate for women remained relatively stable, fluctuating between 80% and 85%, with a minor decline from approximately 85% in 2003 to just below 80% in 2009. Canada and Germany had comparable employment rates for women, though Germany started lower. Canada's rate was stable, increasing marginally from around 69% in 2003 to about 70% in 2009. Germany showed a steady rise from 60% in 2003 to around 65% by the end of the period.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
Chile displayed a significant increase in female employment, rising from about 35% in 2003 to 45% in 2009. Conversely, Turkey had the lowest rates, fluctuating slightly between 20% and 25%.
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