Giải đề"The graph below shows the percentage of people unemployed in the total labour work force across 9 countries in 1994 and 2004."IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 14/8/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải đề"The graph below shows the percentage of people unemployed in the total labour work force across 9 countries in 1994 and 2004."IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 14/8/2023)

The graph below shows the percentage of people unemployed in the total labour work force across 9 countries in 1994 and 2004.

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  • Overall:
    • Ireland managed to better control its unemployment rate compared to other countries over the specified period. 
    • Japan experienced a lesser unemployment issue than other surveyed countries
  • Body 1: Viết về số liệu giảm 
    • In 1994, Ireland had the highest unemployment rate at over 14.8%, but over the course of a decade, it significantly reduced it to just 4.4%, becoming the country with the lowest unemployment rate in this year>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • Some other nations, such as Italy, Canada, and the USA, made modest improvements in their unemployment rates, lowering them from 11.8% to 8.4%, 10.6% to 7.7%, and 7.2% to 5.4%, respectively.
    • The UK saw a sharp decrease in its unemployment rate from 9.5% to 4.7% in 2004
  • Body 2: Viết về số liệu tăng 
    • Conversely, several countries experienced an increase in their unemployment rates, and among them, Poland saw the most significant rise, going from 12.4% in 1994 to 19% in 2004, claiming the top spot for unemployment during that year.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
    • Other countries also faced relatively high unemployment rates, such as Germany, which increased from 7% to 9.4%, and Australia, which went from 5% to 5.4%. 
    • Japan's rate also climbed from 2.7% to 4.7%, but its actual figure for unemployed individuals remained relatively low compared to the other mentioned countries.

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