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Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải đề"The graph below shows the percentage of part-time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010."IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Giải đề thi 28/4/2024)
I. Đề bài
The graph below shows the percentage of part-time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010
II. Kiến thức liên quan
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III. Phân tích
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- Overall:
- There has generally been a slight increase in part-time workers from 1980 to 2010, with the exception of Northern Ireland.
- The graph also indicates that England and Wales have significantly more part-time workers than Northern Ireland and Scotland.
- Body 1: Viết về England + Wales
- In 1980, 25% of people in England were employed part-time, surpassed only by Wales, where about 33% worked part-time.
- Both countries experienced an increase in the percentage of part-time workers by 2010, with England's figure rising to over 30% and Wales's to just over 35%.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
- Body 2: Còn lại
- Scotland had the lowest percentage of part-time workers in 1980, with just over 10%. However, this increased to almost 20% in 2010, marking a significant rise.
- Northern Ireland, on the other hand, was the only country where the percentage of part-time workers decreased, dropping from around 15% in 1980 to a couple of percentage points lower in 2010.
- Overall:
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