Giải đề"The graph below gives information on the number of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020." IELTS WRITING TASK 1

Bên cạnh Bài sửa đề thi IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ngày 22/8/2020 của HS đi thi đạt 7.0, IELTS TUTOR Giải đề"The graph below gives information on the number of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020." IELTS WRITING TASK 1

The graph below gives information on the number of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020

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  • Overall:
    • The number of participants increased in all activities, except for amateur dramatics, with the film club consistently having the highest participation despite fluctuations.
  • Body 1:  Viết về film club + martial arts + Musical performances 
    • In 2000, the film club and martial arts had about 61 and 35 participants, respectively, and these numbers remained stable by 2020 despite some fluctuations.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR 
    • Musical performances, introduced in 2005, saw a steady increase in participation, reaching approximately 20 participants by 2020.
  • Body 2: Viết về các category còn lại
    • Viết về Amateur dramatics + Table tennis 
      • Participation in amateur dramatics and table tennis grew slowly during the first five years, reaching 30 and 20 participants, respectively in 2005. 
      • While amateur dramatics saw a significant decline over the next 15 years, ending with only 5 participants in 2020, table tennis experienced a substantial rise, peaking at over 50 participants by 2020 after remaining steady until 2010.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The graph illustrates the number of participants in various activities at a social center in Melbourne, Australia, from 2000 to 2020.

Overall, the number of participants increased in all activities except amateur dramatics. The film club consistently had the highest participation despite fluctuations.

In 2000, the film club and martial arts had approximately 61 and 35 participants, respectively. These numbers showed some fluctuations but remained relatively stable by 2020. Additionally, musical performances, introduced in 2005, showed a steady increase in participation, reaching approximately 20 participants by 2020. This gradual rise indicates growing interest and involvement in musical activities over the 15-year period.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 1 (Complaint letter) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)

Amateur dramatics and table tennis saw different trends. Participation in both activities grew slowly during the first five years, reaching 30 and 20 participants, respectively, by 2005. However, while amateur dramatics witnessed a significant decline over the next 15 years, ending with only 5 participants in 2020, table tennis experienced a substantial rise. After remaining steady until 2010, table tennis participation peaked at over 50 participants by 2020.

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