Giải đề"The government and individuals are spending too much money on national celebrations like new year or festivals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020"Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải đề"The government and individuals are spending too much money on national celebrations like new year or festivals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

The government and individuals are spending too much money on national celebrations like new year or festivals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: These events play a crucial role in fostering a sense of unity, cultural identity, and national pride. 
      • Supporting idea: Celebrations often have positive social and economic impacts, boosting tourism, supporting local businesses, and creating jobs.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Example: The Carnival in Rio de Janeiro, with its vibrant samba parades, music, and dance, not only attracts millions of tourists and showcases Brazil's diverse culture but also fosters national pride, strengthens cultural identity, and injects billions of dollars into the local economy through tourism, hospitality, and retail.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Allocating resources to celebrate cultural and national events is an investment in the nation's collective spirit and can have intangible but valuable benefits for societal cohesion.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Celebrations provide a platform for citizens to express and celebrate their shared cultural heritage and national identity. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
        • This reinforcement of identity creates a sense of belonging and pride, contributing to a stronger national community.
      • Example: The hosting of the 2018 Winter Olympics in South Korea served as a platform for national unity and pride, rallying the nation behind its athletes, showcasing Korean culture globally, and fostering a sense of shared accomplishment and resilience.

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