Giải đề"The consumption of the world’s resources (oil, and water etc) is increasing at a dangerous rate. What are the causes and solutions?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Kèm bài sửa HS IELTS TUTOR)

Bên cạnh Bài sửa đề thi IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ngày 22/8/2020 của HS đi thi đạt 7.0 writing, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn kĩ thêm Giải đề"The consumption of the world’s resources (oil, and water etc) is increasing at a dangerous rate. What are the causes and solutions?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Kèm bài sửa HS IELTS TUTOR)

The consumption of the world’s resources (oil, and water etc) is increasing at a dangerous rate. What are the causes and solutions?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng 2 câu hỏi bố cục thân bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi số 1: What are the dangers of this situation?
    • Main idea 1: Natural resources will be dwindling shortly in the near future. 
      • Supporting idea: A possible scenario of this is that countries may fall into a fuel war, which threatens mankind as a whole  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách paraphrase từ "reduce" tiếng anh
      • Example: A real-life example is the ongoing tensions in the South China Sea, where countries like China, Vietnam, and the Philippines are in conflict over rich oil and natural gas reserves. As these resources dwindle, such disputes could escalate into full-scale conflicts, posing a significant threat to global stability.

    • Main idea 2: The over-consumption of the world natural resources may lead to other environmental problems including global warming 
      • Supporting idea:  The consumption of natural resource would release a considerable number of exhaust fumes with carbon dioxide and nitrogen oxides, causing serious air pollution and the greenhouse effect. This may lead to more serious issues such as health problems and global warming.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "release" tiếng anh
      • Example: A real-life example of over-consumption of natural resources is the extensive burning of fossil fuels in countries like China and the United States, which releases significant amounts of carbon dioxide and nitrogen oxides into the atmosphere. This contributes to serious air pollution, the greenhouse effect, and global warming, leading to severe health problems and more extreme weather events.

  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi số 2: What should we do?
    • Main idea 1: Campaigns should be continued to raise public awareness about saving energy.
      • Supporting idea: We can opt for public transport whenever possible rather than relying on our private vehicles. This will contribute to a reduction in the level of exhaust emissions released into the environment, slowing down the progress of global warming.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  CÁCH PARAPHRASE TỪ "CHOOSE" IELTS
      • Example: In London, the "Go Green, Travel Clean" campaign successfully encouraged the use of public transportation, leading to a noticeable decrease in private car usage and exhaust emissions. This initiative raised public awareness about the environmental benefits of opting for public transport, contributing to the fight against global warming.

    • Main idea 2: Alternative energy sources should be developed to reduce our dependence on fossil fuels. 
      • Supporting idea: It is neccessary for the government to invest in solar power, wind power, and nuclear energy to make them viable for public use in the coming years.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ "reduction" tiếng anh
      • Example: A real-life example is Germany's Energiewende initiative, where the government has invested heavily in solar power, wind power, and nuclear energy. By 2020, renewable energy sources accounted for over 40% of Germany's electricity consumption, significantly reducing reliance on fossil fuels and setting a benchmark for other nations.

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