Giải đề"The chart below shows information about the favourite subjects of 60 students from two schools, school A and school B."IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 16/8/2023)

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The chart below shows information about the favourite subjects of 60 students from two schools, school A and school B.

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  • Overall: Craft and drawing is the least favored subject among school A students while science is the least liked subject among students in school B.
  • Body 1: Category School A > School B 
    • In school A, over half of the students (36) have an affinity for sports, compared to the figure for school B (5)  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The most significant difference lies in the number of students who choose sports as their favorite subject, with 36 students in school A compared to only 5 in school B)
    • Only two students in school B have a preference for science, whereas school A has nine students who favor science. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
  • Body 2: Category School A < School B
    • In school B, a substantial 25 students have a fondness for craft and drawing, which is more than six times the number of students in school A who share this interest. 
    • Language is the second most favored subject in school B, with 18 students selecting it. 
    • Social science ranks third in popularity, with 10 students in school B liking it, almost double the number of students in school A who are interested in it. 

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The bar chart illustrates (minh họa) the number of students from two schools, A and B, who chose different subjects as their favourite ones.

Overall, sports was by far the most popular subject among students in school A, whereas craft and drawing was the least liked. In contrast, the opposite trend was observed in school B, where craft and drawing attracted the greatest number of students, while science was the least preferred subject.

In school A, over half of the students (36) had an affinity (sự yêu thích mạnh mẽ) for sports, compared to only five in school B. The most pronounced (rõ rệt) difference between the two schools lay in this category. Science also showed a noticeable gap, with nine students in school A expressing a preference for it, whereas only two students in school B shared this interest.>> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

By contrast, students in school B showed greater interest in other subjects. A substantial (đáng kể) 25 students enjoyed craft and drawing, which was more than six times the number in school A. Language was the second most favored subject in school B with 18 students, followed by social science with 10, almost double the figure for school A.

New Vocabulary Explanation

illustrates (minh họa): to show or explain something clearly with examples or charts.
Synonyms: depicts, demonstrates, portrays
Antonyms: conceals, hides, obscures
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The bar chart illustrates the number of students...

affinity (sự yêu thích mạnh mẽ): a strong liking or natural connection with something.
Synonyms: fondness, affection, attachment
Antonyms: aversion, dislike, indifference
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Over half of the students had an affinity for sports...

pronounced (rõ rệt): very noticeable or strongly marked.
Synonyms: distinct, evident, striking
Antonyms: subtle, faint, mild
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The most pronounced difference between the two schools lay in this category.

substantial (đáng kể): large in amount or importance.
Synonyms: considerable, significant, remarkable
Antonyms: negligible, minor, slight
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: A substantial 25 students enjoyed craft and drawing...

Difficult Grammar Structures

1. The most pronounced difference between the two schools lay in this category.
   → Inversion of “lay in” for emphasis.
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2. A substantial 25 students enjoyed craft and drawing, which was more than six times the number in school A.
   → Complex sentence with relative clause and comparative expression.
   → Translation: Có 25 học sinh yêu thích môn thủ công và vẽ, gấp hơn sáu lần số lượng học sinh ở trường A.

3. Science also showed a noticeable gap, with nine students in school A expressing a preference for it, whereas only two students in school B shared this interest.
   → Complex sentence with participle clause (expressing) and contrast clause (whereas).
   → Translation: Môn khoa học cũng thể hiện sự chênh lệch đáng chú ý, với 9 học sinh ở trường A yêu thích nó, trong khi chỉ có 2 học sinh ở trường B có cùng sở thích.

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