Giải đề"The bar chart shows the distribution of employment among agriculture, services, industries in three countries in 1980 and projected distribution in 2020"IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 23/8/2023)

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The bar chart shows the distribution of employment among agriculture, services, industries in three countries in 1980 and projected distribution in 2020

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  • Overall:
    • It's evident that services dominated employment in both country A and country C while country B had a higher demand for agricultural jobs.
  • Body 1: Năm 1980 
    • In 1980, the workforce in country A was primarily engaged in service sectors, accounting for nearly 45%, which was significantly higher (by 15% and 25%) than the figures for industry and agriculture, respectively. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • Country C exhibited a similar pattern, with approximately 65% of employment in services, about 35% in industry, and a negligible 5% in agriculture. 
    • Agriculture was the primary source of employment in country B, representing 55%, which was far higher than industry and services, accounting for only about one-fifth of total employment.
  • Body 2: Năm 2020 
    • It is projected that services will become even more dominant, with their shares rising to 55% in country A and a significant 80% in country C. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
    • The proportions of employment in the other two sectors in country A and B are expected to decrease by 2% to 9%. 
    • In country B, these figures are anticipated to grow by 20%, narrowing the gap with the figure for agriculture, which will experience a slight decline, reaching just under 50%.

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