Giải đề"Thanks to the increase of technology, people today have greater amount of free time.What are the advantages and disadvantages of the conveniences created by modern technology?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích"Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?"IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải đề"Thanks to the increase of technology, people today have greater amount of free time.What are the advantages and disadvantages of the conveniences created by modern technology?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Thanks to the increase of technology, people today have greater amount of free time.What are the advantages and disadvantages of the conveniences created by modern technology?

• Dạng advantages & disadvantages thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé

• Dạng advantages & disadvantages có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
    • Main idea 1: Technologies such as smartphones and the internet have made information more accessible, enabling faster decision-making and reducing the time spent on traditional activities.
      • Example: Planning a trip to a new city has become significantly more streamlined with smartphones and the internet, allowing access to up-to-date information on attractions, restaurants, and transportation through online guides, interactive maps, and user reviews, eliminating the need for traditional and time-consuming methods.
      • Supporting idea: Smartphones and the internet provide immediate access to vast amounts of information, allowing individuals to quickly gather data and make informed decisions without the need for extensive research or manual processes.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 1 (Complaint letter) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
    • Main idea 2: Supporters of modern technology argue that it has significantly increased efficiency and productivity, thereby providing people with more free time. 
      • Supporting idea: Automation, communication tools, and various software applications have streamlined many tasks, allowing individuals to complete work more quickly and effectively.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 2 (dạng advantages & disadvantages) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
      • Example: Consider the evolution of the financial industry. In the past, tasks such as processing transactions, balancing accounts, and managing investments were all done manually, requiring significant time and effort. Today, these tasks are largely automated using sophisticated software systems, enabling financial institutions to process vast amounts of data quickly and accurately.

• Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages  
  • Main idea 1: While technology connects people virtually, it can contribute to social isolation as face-to-face interactions diminish. This can lead to feelings of loneliness and disconnect.
    • Supporting idea: 
      • Virtual interactions often lack the depth and richness of face-to-face communication
      • Social media and messaging platforms may prioritize brevity and immediacy over meaningful conversations, leading to more superficial connections >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
    • Example: Studies suggest a rise in social isolation among young adults, linked to the growing reliance on digital communication; texting and online interactions may replace in-person conversations, potentially lacking the depth and emotional connection of face-to-face encounters.
  • Main idea 2: People are often connected to work and social media 24/7, which can blur the boundaries between work and leisure time.
    • Supporting idea: The widespread use of smartphones and other mobile devices allows people to access work emails and social media platforms from virtually anywhere, making it easier to stay connected even outside traditional working hours.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • Example: 
      • A person who takes work calls or works on projects during their personal time, such as on vacation or while spending time with family and friends.
      • A person who is constantly checking social media for work-related updates or messages, even when they are not supposed to be working.

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