Giải đề"Students leave high school without learning the way how to manage their money. What are the reasons and solutions for this issue?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi 15/10/2023)

Bên cạnh Bài sửa đề thi IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ngày 22/8/2020 của HS đi thi đạt 7.0 writing, IELTS TUTOR Hướng dẫn Giải đề"Students leave high school without learning the way how to manage their money. What are the reasons and solutions for this issue?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi 15/10/2023)

Students leave high school without learning the way how to manage their money. What are the reasons and solutions for this issue?

IELTS TUTOR tổng hợp từ vựng topic money

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Cần đọc kĩ đề "A lot of young people do not know how to manage their money when graduating from high school."
• Đề nhấn mạnh rõ là:
  • young people 
  • graduate from high school nên nếu lấy ví dụ chung people hoặc old people là sai hoặc nếu lấy ví dụ con nít 3-4 tuổi cũng sai 

IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn phân bố bố cục như sau:

• Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi: What do you think are the reasons? 
  • Cause 1: chính bản thân ba mẹ của young people cũng chưa có đầy đủ kiến thức về manage money nên không dạy lại cho con họ được 
    • Main idea: The lack of money skills among parents is indeed a significant contributing factor to the financial illiteracy of young people. 
    • Supporting idea: Parents often serve as primary role models and educators for their children, and when they themselves lack financial knowledge and skills, it becomes challenging to impart those lessons effectively.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • Example: A single mother, juggling two jobs to make ends meet, lacks the time and energy to teach her son about money management, leading to his financial struggles in adulthood, marked by debt, overspending, and a lack of savings.

  • Cause 2: nhà trường thiếu các giờ học giáo dục về manage money 
    • Main idea: Most high schools do not offer comprehensive financial education as part of their curriculum. 
    • Supporting idea: As a result, students may lack the knowledge and skills necessary to manage their finances effectively.
    • Example: A study by the National Endowment for Financial Education revealed that, in only 17 states, high school students are mandated to take a personal finance course, leaving the majority of students unprepared to handle crucial financial matters, resulting in issues like credit card debt, student loans, and bankruptcy in their post-graduation lives.

• Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi: What can be done to teach them this important skill?
  • Solution 1: giải quyết Cause 1: khuyến khích mọi người nhất là các bậc cha mẹ đọc sách và tiếp cận thông tin về manage money để sau còn dạy được con họ 
    • Main idea: Encourage a family-based approach to financial education. 
    • Supporting idea: Families can learn about financial topics together, fostering a more open and supportive environment for discussing money matters.
  • Solution 2: giải quyết Cause 2: có các lớp học chuyên dạy về quản lí tài chính vì đây là kĩ năng cực kì quan trọng 
    • Main idea: Communities, schools, and nonprofit organizations can offer financial education programs not only for young people but also for parents. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
    • Supporting idea: These programs can cover basic financial concepts, budgeting, saving, investing, and debt management.
    • Example: A struggling single mother, concerned about her son's financial future, enrolls in a community financial education program, where she gains essential money management skills, learns to budget, save, and invest, and begins imparting these knowledge to her son, fostering a brighter financial outlook for both.

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