Giải đề"Some say that modern technology is giving people more free time, while others think it is making them busier. Discuss both views and give your opinion." IELTS GENERAL WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích"Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?"IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải đề"Some say that modern technology is giving people more free time, while others think it is making them busier. Discuss both views and give your opinion." IELTS GENERAL WRITING TASK 2

Some say that modern technology is giving people more free time, while others think it is making them busier. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some say that modern technology is giving people more free time
    • Main idea 1: Supporters of modern technology argue that it has significantly increased efficiency and productivity, thereby providing people with more free time. 
      • Supporting idea: Automation, communication tools, and various software applications have streamlined many tasks, allowing individuals to complete work more quickly and effectively.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 2 (dạng advantages & disadvantages) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
      • Example: Consider the evolution of the financial industry. In the past, tasks such as processing transactions, balancing accounts, and managing investments were all done manually, requiring significant time and effort. Today, these tasks are largely automated using sophisticated software systems, enabling financial institutions to process vast amounts of data quickly and accurately.
    • Main idea 2: Additionally, technologies such as smartphones and the internet have made information more accessible, enabling faster decision-making and reducing the time spent on traditional activities.
      • Supporting idea: Smartphones and the internet provide immediate access to vast amounts of information, allowing individuals to quickly gather data and make informed decisions without the need for extensive research or manual processes.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 1 (Complaint letter) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
      • Example: Planning a trip to a new city has become significantly more streamlined with smartphones and the internet, allowing access to up-to-date information on attractions, restaurants, and transportation through online guides, interactive maps, and user reviews, eliminating the need for traditional and time-consuming methods.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm others think it is making them busier & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: People are often connected to work and social media 24/7, which can blur the boundaries between work and leisure time.
      • Supporting idea: The widespread use of smartphones and other mobile devices allows people to access work emails and social media platforms from virtually anywhere, making it easier to stay connected even outside traditional working hours.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Example: 
        • A person who takes work calls or works on projects during their personal time, such as on vacation or while spending time with family and friends.
        • A person who is constantly checking social media for work-related updates or messages, even when they are not supposed to be working.
    • Main idea 2: In some industries and professions, the 21st century has seen an increase in work demands, leading to longer working hours and higher stress levels. 
      • Supporting idea: Economic pressures and job insecurity can also contribute to people working more and having less leisure time.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
      • Example: Healthcare workers have seen a significant increase in work demands in the 21st century. This is due to a number of factors, including an aging population, rising healthcare costs, and increasing complexity of medical procedures. 

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