Giải đề"Some people want government to spend money on life on other planets, however, others think it is a waste of public money when the earth has so many problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2(ĐỀ THI 18/1/2024) Kèm bài sửa task response HS IELTS TUTOR

Bên cạnh Phân tích +kèm sửa bài"The table below shows the number of visitors in the UK and their average spending from 2003 to 2008" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải đề"Some people want government to spend money on life on other planets, however, others think it is a waste of public money when the earth has so many problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2(ĐỀ THI 18/1/2024)

Some people want government to spend money on life on other planets, however, others think it is a waste of public money when the earth has so many problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm others think it is a waste of public money when the earth has so many problems.
    • Main idea 1: Critics argue that the vast amounts of money spent on space exploration could be better used to address urgent problems on Earth, such as poverty, hunger, healthcare, and climate change. 
      • Supporting idea: They question the prioritization of space exploration over solving immediate issues.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Sửa bài IELTS SPEAKING PART 1-2-3 topic Work/Study(Sửa & Làm lại 4 lần - HS đạt 7.5)
      • Example: In 2019, NASA's budget was approximately $21.5 billion, while the World Food Programme received $8.4 billion. Critics argue that the funds used for space exploration could have provided food assistance to millions facing hunger.
    • Main idea 2: Some critics argue that the resources required for space exploration could be better spent on ethical considerations, such as addressing social injustices or improving education and healthcare, rather than pursuing endeavors that may benefit only a small fraction of the population.
      • Example: Investing in education has proven benefits like reducing poverty, improving healthcare outcomes, and fostering economic growth. A 2016 study by UNESCO found that every dollar invested in primary education yields an average return of $13.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people want government to spend money on life on other planets & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Space exploration drives scientific discovery and expands our understanding of the universe. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • It pushes the boundaries of human knowledge, leading to technological advancements that have practical applications beyond space exploration. 
      • Example: 
        • The Voyager 1 and 2 spacecraft are the farthest human-made objects in space. They have been used to study the outer solar system and the interstellar medium, and they have helped us to understand how the solar system formed and evolved.
        • **The Mars rovers have been used to study the surface of Mars, and they have helped us to learn more about the history of Mars and the potential for life on Mars.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • Main idea 2: Space exploration requires the development of cutting-edge technologies that have far-reaching applications. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Investments in space programs often lead to advancements in robotics, satellite technology, computer systems, and energy-efficient solutions. 
        • These innovations can have significant benefits for society, driving economic growth and improving everyday life.
      • Example: 
        • The development of MRI technology was inspired by research conducted on the Space Shuttle. Scientists were studying the effects of microgravity on the human body, and they discovered that MRI could be used to create detailed images of the body without the use of radiation.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
        • The development of Kevlar was inspired by research conducted on the space program. Scientists were looking for a material that could be used to make bulletproof vests, and they found that Kevlar was a strong and lightweight material that could stop bullets.
        • The development of GPS was inspired by the need to track satellites in space. Scientists developed a system that could track the position of satellites in space, and this system was later adapted to create GPS, which is now used by millions of people around the world.

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