Giải đề"Some people think the Olympic Games are an existing event that can bring nations together. Others think it’s a waste of money. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020"Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải đề"Some people think the Olympic Games are an existing event that can bring nations together. Others think it’s a waste of money. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Some people think the Olympic Games are an existing event that can bring nations together. Others think it’s a waste of money. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

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• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Others think it’s a waste of money
    • Main idea 1: Hosting the Olympics can be extremely expensive, with costs often exceeding initial estimates. 
      • Supporting idea: These costs are borne by taxpayers and can strain public finances, leading to budget deficits and cuts in essential services.
      • Example: In 2009, Rio de Janeiro secured the honor of hosting the 2016 Summer Olympics, envisioning a boost in tourism, infrastructure, and national pride. However, initial estimates of $14 billion swelled to $21.5 billion due to construction delays, corruption scandals, and economic instability, burdening Brazilian taxpayers and leading to cuts in essential services like education and healthcare. Consequently, the aftermath left Rio with unfinished infrastructure, a struggling economy, and social unrest, emphasizing the need for careful planning, realistic budgeting, and prioritization of public needs in hosting future Olympic events.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • Main idea 2: Many Olympic venues and facilities become underutilized or abandoned after the Games, leading to wasted resources and maintenance costs. 
      • Supporting idea: These "white elephants" can burden host cities with ongoing expenses without providing meaningful benefits.
      • Example: The 1976 Montreal Olympics promised grandeur with the construction of a massive, retractable-roof stadium envisioned for various events, but its ambitious design led to financial unsustainability and underutilization after the Games, earning it the title of a "white elephant." 

• • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people think the Olympic Games are an existing event that can bring nations together. & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: The Olympics provide a platform for nations to come together and engage in friendly competition, fostering mutual understanding and cultural exchanges. 
      • Supporting idea: Athletes from different countries interact, build relationships, and promote dialogue, which can contribute to reducing tensions and promoting peace.
      • Example: 
        • The Olympic Games are a great example of how athletes from different countries can interact, build relationships, and promote dialogue. The games bring together athletes from all over the world to compete in a variety of sports. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "promote"
    • Main idea 2: The process of hosting and participating in the Olympics often requires international cooperation, leading to collaborations between nations in areas such as infrastructure development, security, and sports administration. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "development" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: These interactions can contribute to diplomatic relations and promote dialogue on shared interests beyond the sporting event itself.
      • Example: 
        • The 2008 Olympic Games in Beijing were also a major undertaking that required extensive international cooperation. The games involved the construction of new sporting venues, the improvement of existing infrastructure, and the provision of security for athletes and spectators.
        • The 2020 Olympic Games in Tokyo were also a major undertaking that required extensive international cooperation. The games were postponed due to the COVID-19 pandemic, but they still required the cooperation of many different countries.

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