Giải đề"Some people think that it is necessary to use animals for testing medicines intended for human use, while others argue that it is cruel to do that. Discuss both views and give your opinion."IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề 11/4/2024)

Bên cạnh cung cấp thêm PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), Hãy đọc kĩ Giải đề"Some people think that it is necessary to use animals for testing medicines intended for human use, while others argue that it is cruel to do that. Discuss both views and give your opinion."IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề 11/4/2024)

• Some people think that it is necessary to use animals for testing medicines intended for human use, while others argue that it is cruel to do that. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Public health challenges: những thách thức về sức khỏe cộng đồng 
• Excessive consumption of meat: sự tiêu thụ thịt quá đà. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý CÁCH DÙNG "CONSUMPTION" TIẾNG ANH
• Enjoy better health: tận hưởng sức khỏe tốt hơn 
• Alternative meat products: các sản phẩm thay thế thịt 
• Contain high levels of protein: chứa hàm lượng Protein cao 
• Receive little endorsement: nhận được rất ít sự ủng hộ 
• Plant-based medicines: các loại thuốc làm từ thực vật 
• Fulfill our needs: đáp ứng nhu cầu của chúng ta 
• Justify the suffering of animals: bào chữa cho sự chịu đựng của động vật. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "suffer" tiếng anh

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• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people think that it is necessary to use animals for testing medicines intended for human use
    • Main idea 1: Proponents argue that animal testing is necessary to ensure the safety of medicines intended for human use. 
      • Supporting idea: By testing on animals first, researchers can identify potential adverse effects and determine safe dosages before human trials begin.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Example: In the 1950s, a drug called Thalidomide was prescribed as a morning sickness medication for pregnant women. Tragically, Thalidomide, which had passed human trials without major red flags,  caused severe birth defects in thousands of babies born to mothers who took the drug. Subsequent investigations revealed that animal testing protocols at the time were inadequate, failing to detect the drug's teratogenic (birth defect-causing) effects in pregnant animals.
    • Main idea 2: Animal testing is often considered essential for understanding basic biological mechanisms and disease processes. 
      • Supporting idea: Many argue that the physiological similarities between animals and humans make them suitable models for studying human health and disease.
      • Example: By observing the effects of the mutated gene in mice, researchers can gain a deeper understanding of the biological pathways disrupted in CF. This knowledge is crucial for identifying potential drug targets.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm others argue that it is cruel to do that & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Subjecting animals to potentially harmful experiments is inherently cruel and unethical. 
      • Supporting idea: Animals used in testing may experience pain, distress, and suffering, raising moral questions about the justification of such practices.
    • Main idea 2: with the development of technology, we can replace animal experimentations with sophisticated computer programs that could provide more accurate results. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Advanced computer programs can simulate biological processes with high precision, offering a more accurate representation of human physiology compared to animal models. 
        • These simulations can incorporate diverse factors such as genetic variations, environmental influences, and disease progression, leading to more reliable results.
      • Example: computer-based testing has been used to test the safety of new drugs or cancer treatments and has proved effective (HOẶC: in the past, violin strings were mostly made from sheep's intestines, but they are very expensive and hard to keep them in good conditions). >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "condition" tiếng anh

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