Giải đề"Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI TASK 1 VIẾT THƯ NGÀY 05/7/2020"you are going to take a holiday and your friend agrees to stay at your house. Write a letter to him for"IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa HS đạt 6.0 đi thi thật), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải đề"Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. 
    • Main idea 1: Competition can serve as a powerful motivator, pushing individuals to strive for excellence. 
      • Supporting idea:
        • When people compete, they often set higher goals for themselves and work harder to achieve them. 
        • This drive can lead to improved performance, innovation, and personal growth. >> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR 
      • Example: For instance, students may study harder to outperform their peers, and employees might go the extra mile to secure a promotion or bonus.
    • Main idea 2: In a competitive environment, individuals and organizations are encouraged to innovate and improve continuously. 
      • Supporting idea: This drive for innovation can lead to the development of new products, services, and technologies that benefit society as a whole. 
      • Example: For example, competition in the tech industry has led to rapid advancements in smartphones, computing, and artificial intelligence.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Cooperation emphasizes teamwork and collective effort, leading to a synergy where the whole is greater than the sum of its parts. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • When people collaborate, they can pool their diverse skills and knowledge, leading to more creative and effective solutions. 
        • This is particularly important in complex problem-solving scenarios where multiple perspectives are needed.
      • Example: Consider the Human Genome Project, an international research effort launched in 1990 that aimed to map all the genes in human DNA, requiring the collaboration of thousands of scientists from various disciplines who, by pooling their expertise and sharing information, overcame significant technical challenges to sequence the entire human genome by 2003.
    • Main idea 2: A cooperative environment can reduce stress and promote well-being. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Constant competition can lead to anxiety, burnout, and unhealthy rivalry. 
        • On the other hand, cooperation fosters a supportive atmosphere where individuals can work together without the fear of being undermined. 
        • This can lead to a healthier and more sustainable work or learning environment.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

In today's society, the debate between competition and cooperation is highly relevant. Some argue that competition at work, school, and in daily life is beneficial, while others believe that cooperation should be prioritized. Both perspectives have their merits, but I do believe that cooperation offers more sustainable and holistic advantages.

On one hand, competition has several benefits. To begin with, competition can serve as a powerful motivator, pushing individuals to strive for excellence. When people compete, they often set higher goals for themselves and work harder to achieve them. This drive can lead to improved performance, innovation, and personal growth. For instance, students may study harder to outperform their peers, and employees might go the extra mile to secure a promotion or bonus. Secondly, in a competitive environment, individuals and organizations are encouraged to innovate and improve continuously. This drive for innovation can lead to the development of new products, services, and technologies that benefit society as a whole. For example, competition in the tech industry has led to rapid advancements in smartphones, computing, and artificial intelligence.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 2 (dạng advantages & disadvantages) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)

On the other hand, I am of the opinion that working together has many advantages. First and foremost, cooperation emphasizes teamwork and collective effort, leading to a synergy where the whole is greater than the sum of its parts. When people collaborate, they can pool their diverse skills and knowledge, leading to more creative and effective solutions. This is particularly important in complex problem-solving scenarios where multiple perspectives are needed. Consider the Human Genome Project, an international research effort launched in 1990 that aimed to map all the genes in human DNA, requiring the collaboration of thousands of scientists from various disciplines who, by pooling their expertise and sharing information, overcame significant technical challenges to sequence the entire human genome by 2003. Additionally, a cooperative environment can reduce stress and promote well-being. While constant competition can result in anxiety, burnout, and unhealthy rivalry, cooperation promotes a supportive environment where individuals collaborate without fear of being undermined, thereby creating a healthier and more sustainable work or learning setting.

In conclusion, while competition can drive innovation and personal growth, cooperation offers a more balanced and sustainable approach that enhances collective problem-solving and individual well-being.

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