Giải đề"Some people believe that national sports teams and individual athletes who represent their country should be financially supported by the government. Some people think that they should be funded by non-government groups (e.g. business, sponsorship). Discuss both views and give your opinion?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020"Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải đề"Some people believe that national sports teams and individual athletes who represent their country should be financially supported by the government. Some people think that they should be funded by non-government groups (e.g. business, sponsorship). Discuss both views and give your opinion?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Some people believe that national sports teams and individual athletes who represent their country should be financially supported by the government. Some people think that they should be funded by non-government groups (e.g. business, sponsorship). Discuss both views and give your opinion?

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people think that they should be funded by non-government groups (e.g. business, sponsorship)
    • Main idea 1: Some argue that non-governmental funding, such as sponsorships and business support, encourages efficiency and accountability. 
      • Supporting idea: Private entities may demand results and performance in exchange for their investment, potentially leading to more effective use of resources.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Example: Room to Read, an NGO promoting literacy and gender equality, collaborates with businesses like Google and Nike for sponsorships, tailoring programs to specific communities. This strategic approach not only resonates with private entities but also ensures program effectiveness through measurable impact, attracting further investment.
    • Main idea 2: Critics of government funding suggest that public resources could be better spent on essential services such as healthcare, education, and infrastructure. 
      • Supporting idea: They argue that sports should rely on private investment, allowing governments to prioritize other critical areas.
      • Example: Brazil's hosting of the 2014 FIFA World Cup attracted tourism and investment but raised concerns due to significant public spending on infrastructure upgrades, prompting questions about whether these resources could have been better utilized for other priorities such as healthcare and education.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people believe that national sports teams and individual athletes who represent their country should be financially supported by the government & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Government support for sports teams and athletes can enhance national pride and identity. 
      • Supporting idea: It fosters a sense of unity and collective achievement when the nation invests in its representatives on the international stage.
      • Example: Football hooliganism and nationalistic fervor have marred some international football matches, with violence and xenophobia driven by intense national pride closely linked to team performance.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 1 (Complaint letter) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
    • Main idea 2: Government investment can support the long-term development of sports infrastructure, coaching programs, and athlete training facilities. 
      • Supporting idea: This can contribute to sustained success on the global stage.
      • Example: The Australian Institute of Sport (AIS), a government-funded institution, provides world-class facilities, coaching, and scientific support to elite athletes. This holistic approach has been instrumental in Australia's consistent success in swimming, producing iconic champions like Ian Thorpe and Cate Campbell.

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