Bên cạnh Phân tích"Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?"IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải đề"Nowadays people are spending more time watching movies. Why is this happening? Is it a positive or a negative development?" IELTS GENERAL WRITING TASK 2

Nowadays people are spending more time watching movies. Why is this happening? Is it a positive or a negative development?

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  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: The rise of various streaming platforms has revolutionized access to movies. 
      • Supporting idea: The convenience of watching films at any time from home has significantly increased movie consumption.
      • Example: The availability of Netflix's extensive film library accessible anytime and anywhere with an internet connection has revolutionized movie-watching habits, leading to increased consumption and inspiring similar shifts in other streaming platforms.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • Main idea 2: The movie industry has seen a surge in diverse, high-quality content, catering to different tastes and preferences. 
      • Supporting idea: This variety entices more people to engage with films.
      • Example: The Marvel Cinematic Universe's diverse, high-quality content caters to a wide range of tastes, drawing in diverse audiences and demonstrating the impact of appealing content on engaging both comic book enthusiasts and general moviegoers.
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 - NEGATIVE 
    • Main idea 1: Excessive movie-watching contributes to a sedentary lifestyle, impacting physical health and well-being.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Watching movies often involves sitting for prolonged periods without physical movement, leading to a lack of exercise and its associated health benefits.
        • Sedentary behavior is linked to various health risks such as obesity, cardiovascular issues, and musculoskeletal problems due to prolonged sitting and lack of physical activity.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
      • Example: For instance, research conducted by the American Heart Association highlighted the health risks associated with excessive screen time. A study found that children and adolescents who spend more than two hours a day in front of screens, including watching movies, had higher risks of obesity, increased blood pressure, and elevated cholesterol levels.
    • Main idea 2: Spending excessive time watching movies might lead to reduced social interactions, affecting real-life relationships.
      • Supporting idea: Excessive movie-watching often consumes time that could otherwise be spent engaging in social activities or fostering real-life relationships.
      • Example: A UCLA study showed that increased screen time, including movie watching, is linked to reduced social skills among adolescents, leading to feelings of isolation and challenges in face-to-face interactions.

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