Giải đề"It was predicted that with the development of technology, people would have more free time in 21st century. To what extent do you think the prediction has come true? Give some reasons from your perspective and experience "IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi 28/8/2023 & 23/6/2024)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải đề"It was predicted that with the development of technology, people would have more free time in 21st century. To what extent do you think the prediction has come true? Give some reasons from your perspective and experience "IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi 28/8/2023 & 23/6/2024)

It was predicted that with the development of technology, people would have more free time in 21st century. To what extent do you think the prediction has come true? Give some reasons from your perspective and experience

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: People are often connected to work and social media 24/7, which can blur the boundaries between work and leisure time.
      • Supporting idea: The widespread use of smartphones and other mobile devices allows people to access work emails and social media platforms from virtually anywhere, making it easier to stay connected even outside traditional working hours.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Example: 
        • A person who takes work calls or works on projects during their personal time, such as on vacation or while spending time with family and friends.
        • A person who is constantly checking social media for work-related updates or messages, even when they are not supposed to be working.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: In some industries and professions, the 21st century has seen an increase in work demands, leading to longer working hours and higher stress levels. 
      • Supporting idea: Economic pressures and job insecurity can also contribute to people working more and having less leisure time.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
      • Example: Healthcare workers have seen a significant increase in work demands in the 21st century. This is due to a number of factors, including an aging population, rising healthcare costs, and increasing complexity of medical procedures. 

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

It was predicted that with the development of technology, people would have more free time in the 21st century. However, I believe this prediction has not come true as advancements in technology have led to a more connected and demanding lifestyle, reducing the amount of leisure time available.

Firstly, people are often connected to work and social media 24/7, which blurs the boundaries between work and leisure time. The widespread use of smartphones and other mobile devices allows people to access work emails and social media platforms from virtually anywhere, making it easier to stay connected even outside traditional working hours. For instance, it is common for individuals to take work calls or work on projects during their personal time, such as on vacation or while spending time with family and friends. Similarly, many people constantly check social media for work-related updates or messages, even when they are not supposed to be working, which further intrudes into their personal time.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

Secondly, in some industries and professions, the 21st century has seen an increase in work demands, leading to longer working hours and higher stress levels. As a matter of fact, economic pressures and job insecurity also contribute to people working more and having less leisure time. For example, healthcare workers have experienced a significant increase in work demands due to factors such as an aging population, rising healthcare costs, and the increasing complexity of medical procedures. These pressures result in longer shifts and higher stress levels, leaving less time for relaxation and leisure activities.

In conclusion, the prediction that technological advancements would lead to more free time in the 21st century has not materialized, as people are now more connected and work demands have increased, leaving less time for leisure.

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