Giải đề"​Is teaching people over 65 to use computers the best way to spend government money? To what extent do you agree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi 23/12/2023)

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Is teaching people over 65 to use computers the best way to spend government money? To what extent do you agree?

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• Theo hướng Partly (Vừa ủng hộ ý này, vừa ủng hộ ý kia) có thể tham khảo cách triển khai: 
  • Intro câu 2: Trong khi ý này cũng đúng, ý kia cũng có lý
    • Body 1: On the other hand, viết về ý số 1” Is teaching people over 65 to use computers the best way to spend government money”
      • Main idea 1: As society becomes increasingly digital, teaching older individuals to use computers can contribute to their inclusion in the digital age, enabling them to access information, connect with others, and utilize online services.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
        • Supporting idea: 
          • The digital landscape provides a vast repository of information. 
          • Computer literacy empowers older individuals to access news, educational materials, and various resources online, expanding their knowledge base and keeping them informed about the world.
        • Example: My grandmother used to feel cut off from her family scattered across the country. After learning basic computer skills and video calling, she now enjoys regular face-to-face interactions with her grandchildren, participating in their lives despite the distance.
      • Main idea 2: Computer literacy among older individuals can facilitate communication with family members, friends, and healthcare providers, especially in a world where online communication has become prevalent.
        • Supporting idea: 
          • In an increasingly interconnected world, families are often dispersed geographically. 
          • Computer literacy allows older individuals to engage in various online communication tools such as video calls, emails, and social media, helping them maintain close connections with family members regardless of physical distance.
    • Body 2: On the one hand, viết về ý số 2”có những hạng mục khác nên đầu tư”
      • Main idea 1: There are more pressing needs for government spending, such as healthcare, affordable housing, or social welfare programs, and resources could be better allocated to address these issues.
        • Supporting idea: 
          • The presence of a public health crisis, such as a pandemic or widespread diseases, may necessitate significant investments in healthcare infrastructure, medical research, and vaccine distribution to safeguard the well-being of the population.
          • Many societies face challenges related to healthcare accessibility and affordability. 
          • Allocating resources to enhance healthcare services, reduce medical costs, and improve overall healthcare infrastructure may be seen as a more urgent priority.
        • Main idea 2: Some may question the effectiveness of teaching computer skills to older individuals, arguing that it may not lead to significant improvements in their quality of life or overall well-being.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi)
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Older individuals may face challenges in adapting to new technologies, as they may not have grown up with computers. 
          • Some argue that the learning curve may be steep, leading to frustration and limited adoption of computer skills.
        • Example: Studies have shown that while many older individuals express interest in learning computer skills, the actual adoption rate remains low

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