Giải đề"​In some countries people of all age groups are engaging in too many sports or over-exercising. Are there more advantages or drawbacks to this development?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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​In some countries people of all age groups are engaging in too many sports or over-exercising. Are there more advantages or drawbacks to this development?

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• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (disadvantages>advantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: Excessive exercise without proper rest and recovery may lead to overuse injuries, such as stress fractures, tendinitis, and muscle strains. 
      • Supporting idea: Pushing the body beyond its limits can have long-term consequences.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Example: My friend Sarah, a passionate marathon runner, trained relentlessly for her next race, increasing her mileage without factoring in rest days. This resulted in stress fractures in her tibia, forcing her to miss the race and undergo months of painful rehab, showcasing the importance of balanced training and recovery.
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: Over-exercising can lead to burnout and chronic fatigue, both mentally and physically. 
      • Supporting idea: This may result in a decreased interest in sports, and it can negatively impact overall well-being.
      • Example:  Researchers from Stanford University followed a group of elite triathletes for two seasons. They found that those who trained for more than 40 hours per week were significantly more likely to experience symptoms of burnout, including chronic fatigue, decreased motivation, and impaired performance.
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: Regular exercise helps maintain a healthy weight, improves cardiovascular health, and strengthens muscles and bones.
        • Supporting idea:  It also reduces the risk of chronic diseases such as heart disease, diabetes, and obesity.
        • Example: Researchers from the National Institutes of Health discovered that the most effective strategy for achieving and maintaining a healthy weight involves combining regular physical activity with a healthy diet, although exercise alone was still effective in promoting weight loss and preventing weight regain over time.
      • Main idea 2: Physical activity is linked to improved mood, reduced stress levels, and better mental well-being. 
        • Supporting idea: Exercise stimulates the production of endorphins, which are known as "feel-good" hormones.
        • Example: My uncle David, lost in grief after losing his wife, found solace and restored his sense of calm by enrolling in a tai chi class, where the gentle movements and focused breathing in the serene setting gradually alleviated his stress and rekindled his motivation and joy.
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: Excessive exercise without proper rest and recovery may lead to overuse injuries, such as stress fractures, tendinitis, and muscle strains. 
        • Supporting idea: Pushing the body beyond its limits can have long-term consequences.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi)
        • Example: My friend Sarah, a passionate marathon runner, trained relentlessly for her next race, increasing her mileage without factoring in rest days. This resulted in stress fractures in her tibia, forcing her to miss the race and undergo months of painful rehab, showcasing the importance of balanced training and recovery.
      • Main idea 2: Over-exercising can lead to burnout and chronic fatigue, both mentally and physically. 
        • Supporting idea: This may result in a decreased interest in sports, and it can negatively impact overall well-being.
        • Example:  Researchers from Stanford University followed a group of elite triathletes for two seasons. They found that those who trained for more than 40 hours per week were significantly more likely to experience symptoms of burnout, including chronic fatigue, decreased motivation, and impaired performance.

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