Giải đề"In many countries, the small and private-owned shops are closing down while the large shops are opening up. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?"IELTS WRITING (Đề thi 15/10/2023)

Bên cạnh phân tích kĩ càng đề thi IELTS GENERAL TASK 2 ngày 4/8/2020, kèm bài sửa cho hs đi thi thật, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải đề"In many countries, the small and private-owned shops are closing down while the large shops are opening up. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?"IELTS WRITING (Đề thi 15/10/2023)

In many countries, the small and private-owned shops are closing down while the large shops are opening up. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?

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  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1:  Large shops can often negotiate better deals with suppliers, reducing their costs. 
      • Supporting idea: This allows them to offer competitive prices, drawing in more customers.
      • Example: Walmart's global presence, bulk purchasing power, and tough negotiation tactics enable it to offer shoppers consistently low prices, a key factor in its popularity.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • Main idea 2: Large stores typically offer a wider variety of products, providing convenience for consumers who can find most of their shopping needs in one place.
      • Supporting idea: Modern consumers value convenience and a wide selection, which larger stores can provide.
      • Example: Costco's extensive range of products, from groceries to electronics, offers shoppers unmatched convenience by enabling them to purchase all their needs in one location, contributing to its widespread popularity.
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 - POSITIVE 
    • Main idea 1: mega shopping malls save shoppers’ valuable time   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng & ideas topic "time & time management" IELTS
      • Supporting idea: large shopping complexes bring different vendors under a single roof and offer a spectrum of products (hoặc they provide a single platform to customers where they can purchase everything they need, ranging from groceries to clothing and more)
      • Example: My uncle - John, a busy professional, saved valuable time by shopping at a mega shopping mall, conveniently finding both a new suit for his job interview and groceries in one location, streamlining his errands and reducing hassle.
    • Main idea 2: improve people's shopping experience   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "improve" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: large shopping malls have various entertainment facilities including cinema halls, food court, children's play zone… 
      • Example: In the present, mega shopping malls have revolutionized shopping, offering an enjoyable and memorable experience with diverse entertainment facilities, making it convenient for families, dates, and social outings all in one place.

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