Giải đề"In many countries shops open for longer hours daily every week. What is the negative or positive effect on the shoppers and local community" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 14/4/2024)

Bên cạnh Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải đề"In many countries shops open for longer hours daily every week. What is the negative or positive effect on the shoppers and local community" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 14/4/2024)

In many countries shops open for longer hours daily every week. What is the negative or positive effect on the shoppers and local community

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  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 - Positive Effects
    • Main idea 1: Longer shop hours provide greater flexibility for people with busy schedules, such as those who work late or have unconventional working hours. 
      • Supporting idea: They can shop at their convenience, which may lead to increased customer satisfaction.
      • Example: A study by Verhoef et al. (2003) found that extended store hours positively impacted customer satisfaction, particularly for those with non-traditional work schedules or family commitments hindering shopping during regular hours >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • Main idea 2: Extended shop hours can potentially boost local economic activity by providing more opportunities for shopping and spending. 
      • Supporting idea: This increased economic activity may benefit local businesses, leading to job creation and revenue generation for the community.
      • Example: The implementation of extended hours in major DIY stores, such as Home Depot and Lowe's, addresses the challenge faced by residents in suburban and rural areas with limited daytime shopping windows, potentially benefiting the local economy through increased sales, job creation, and spillover effects on nearby businesses
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 - Negative Effects
    • Main idea 1: Extending shop hours may disproportionately affect small, independent businesses that may struggle to afford the costs associated with longer operating hours. 
      • Supporting idea: This could potentially lead to market consolidation and a loss of diversity in the retail landscape.
      • Example: BThe struggle faced by Main Street Bakery, a family-owned business, against a big box chain with 24/7 operations illustrates the challenge of extended shop hours, where labor costs and competition threaten smaller businesses, potentially leading to market consolidation and a loss of diversity in the retail landscape, emphasizing the importance of balancing convenience with supporting local enterprises for a vibrant community.
    • Main idea 2: For shop owners and employees, longer hours may result in increased stress and a poorer work-life balance. 
      • Supporting idea: This could lead to burnout, decreased job satisfaction, and negative effects on mental and physical health.

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