Giải đề"In many countries, as people are earning more these days they are also spending more money, buying more and more things. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?" IELTS GENERAL WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích"Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?"IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải đề"In many countries, as people are earning more these days they are also spending more money, buying more and more things. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?" IELTS GENERAL WRITING TASK 2

In many countries, as people are earning more these days they are also spending more money, buying more and more things. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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• Dạng this is a positive or negative development? có thể bố cục bài như sau (nếu theo hướng NEGATIVE):
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao NEGATIVE 
    • Main idea: The inclination to spend more with higher earnings often leads to overconsumption. 
    • Supporting idea: This excessive buying, beyond what is necessary, contributes to resource depletion and environmental strain.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • Example: 
      • In the United States, the average household spends about $12,000 per year on clothing. This is more than twice the amount that people in other developed countries spend on clothing. 
      • Another example is the purchase of electronic devices. Many people now own multiple electronic devices, such as smartphones, tablets, and laptops.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 2 (dạng advantages & disadvantages) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao NEGATIVE 
    • Main idea: Increased spending can result in higher levels of debt and reduced savings. 
    • Supporting idea: This could lead to financial instability, leaving individuals vulnerable in the face of economic fluctuations.
    • Example: A young couple, while initially affording their mortgage, begins spending more on various items, dining out frequently, and accumulating credit card debt. When one partner loses their job, they struggle with mortgage and credit card payments, exhausting their savings and facing financial instability. Had they restrained their spending, they would have been better prepared, maintaining more savings and less debt to navigate the financial crisis.

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