Giải đề"Discipline is a growing problem in modern schools. Some people think that parents should discipline their own children, while others think it should be the responsibility of the government. Discuss both views and give your opinion.(IELTS General)" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh phân tích đề thi thật IELTS WRITING TASK 2 dạng Advantages & Disadvantages, IELTS TUTOR Giải đề"Discipline is a growing problem in modern schools. Some people think that parents should discipline their own children, while others think it should be the responsibility of the government. Discuss both views and give your opinion.(IELTS General)" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Discipline is a growing problem in modern schools. Some people think that parents should discipline their own children, while others think it should be the responsibility of the government. Discuss both views and give your opinion.(IELTS General)

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• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm others think it should be the responsibility of the government
    • Main idea 1: Proponents argue that the government should step in to ensure that all children receive a consistent and fair approach to discipline in schools. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • This may involve implementing and enforcing standardized disciplinary measures.
        • Not all parents are capable of providing effective discipline. Some families may face socio-economic challenges, lack proper education, or have other issues that hinder their ability to instill discipline effectively. 

• Body 2: Viết về quan điểm & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
  • Main idea: Parents are considered the primary caregivers and first educators of their children. 
    • Supporting idea: 
      • They are responsible for instilling values, setting boundaries, and teaching appropriate behavior from an early age>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
      • A strong foundation in discipline at home can lead to more respectful and responsible behavior in the classroom. 
    • Example: Children who learn self-control and emotional regulation skills at home are better equipped to manage their impulses and behavior in the classroom. This reduces disruptions and allows them to focus on learning.

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